1 00:00:00,030 --> 00:00:02,470 The following content is provided under a Creative 2 00:00:02,470 --> 00:00:04,000 Commons license. 3 00:00:04,000 --> 00:00:06,330 Your support will help MIT OpenCourseWare 4 00:00:06,330 --> 00:00:10,690 continue to offer high quality educational resources for free. 5 00:00:10,690 --> 00:00:13,300 To make a donation or view additional materials 6 00:00:13,300 --> 00:00:17,025 from hundreds of MIT courses, visit MIT OpenCourseWare 7 00:00:17,025 --> 00:00:17,650 at ocw.mit.edu. 8 00:00:25,560 --> 00:00:28,060 LORNA GIBSON: What I thought I would do today is two things. 9 00:00:28,060 --> 00:00:32,180 I wanted to give this talk about osteochondral scaffolds, 10 00:00:32,180 --> 00:00:33,300 and this is just slides. 11 00:00:33,300 --> 00:00:34,410 I'm not going to write anything down. 12 00:00:34,410 --> 00:00:35,993 So there aren't going to be any notes. 13 00:00:35,993 --> 00:00:38,890 And I'll put the slides on the Stellar site, I don't know, 14 00:00:38,890 --> 00:00:40,960 this afternoon or tonight or something. 15 00:00:40,960 --> 00:00:44,282 And this isn't going to take the whole time we have today, 16 00:00:44,282 --> 00:00:45,740 so the other thing I thought I'd do 17 00:00:45,740 --> 00:00:47,880 is I wanted to walk you through this little booklet 18 00:00:47,880 --> 00:00:50,190 that I handed out about how to write a paper. 19 00:00:50,190 --> 00:00:52,060 So this is by Mike Ashby, who you know, 20 00:00:52,060 --> 00:00:53,060 I've written books with. 21 00:00:53,060 --> 00:00:55,610 He was my PhD advisor and we wrote the books 22 00:00:55,610 --> 00:00:56,930 on cellular solids together. 23 00:00:56,930 --> 00:00:58,760 He has written many books. 24 00:00:58,760 --> 00:01:00,662 I looked him up on Amazon this morning, 25 00:01:00,662 --> 00:01:02,620 and even though I know he'd written many books, 26 00:01:02,620 --> 00:01:03,828 I was shocked how many books. 27 00:01:03,828 --> 00:01:08,230 They had 58 listings for just books with him as a co-author 28 00:01:08,230 --> 00:01:10,410 and some are second editions and third editions. 29 00:01:10,410 --> 00:01:11,576 He's written a lot of books. 30 00:01:11,576 --> 00:01:13,660 He's written a lot of materials, papers. 31 00:01:13,660 --> 00:01:15,310 And he's, in the materials community, 32 00:01:15,310 --> 00:01:19,310 he's seen as a very clear and lucid writer. 33 00:01:19,310 --> 00:01:21,199 So he's written this thing for his students 34 00:01:21,199 --> 00:01:22,990 and I thought we could just walk through it 35 00:01:22,990 --> 00:01:25,236 and I can talk to you a little bit about writing. 36 00:01:25,236 --> 00:01:27,610 Because I know you're not quite there with your projects, 37 00:01:27,610 --> 00:01:29,151 but later on in the term you're going 38 00:01:29,151 --> 00:01:30,670 to want to write up your project, 39 00:01:30,670 --> 00:01:33,740 and it's not too early to start thinking about writing. 40 00:01:33,740 --> 00:01:36,460 And there's some really good advice and it's short 41 00:01:36,460 --> 00:01:38,100 and it's to the point. 42 00:01:38,100 --> 00:01:40,341 It's really helpful, that little brochure. 43 00:01:40,341 --> 00:01:41,840 So we won't read every single thing, 44 00:01:41,840 --> 00:01:43,040 but I wanted to kind of walk through some 45 00:01:43,040 --> 00:01:45,150 of the main points in it, and that pretty much 46 00:01:45,150 --> 00:01:46,100 should take the hour. 47 00:01:46,100 --> 00:01:48,980 So last time we talked about tissue engineering scaffolds, 48 00:01:48,980 --> 00:01:51,740 and today, I wanted to do a case study, 49 00:01:51,740 --> 00:01:53,159 and this was a project we had here 50 00:01:53,159 --> 00:01:55,700 at MIT and in collaboration with some people in the materials 51 00:01:55,700 --> 00:01:57,610 department at Cambridge University. 52 00:01:57,610 --> 00:02:01,290 And we made what we called an osteochondral scaffold. 53 00:02:01,290 --> 00:02:03,410 So osteo means there was a part for regenerating 54 00:02:03,410 --> 00:02:06,150 bone and chondral means there was a part for regenerating 55 00:02:06,150 --> 00:02:07,100 cartilage. 56 00:02:07,100 --> 00:02:09,030 And really the point of the scaffold 57 00:02:09,030 --> 00:02:13,280 was to try to repair small defects in cartilage. 58 00:02:13,280 --> 00:02:16,530 And I'll explain why we did the bone thing as well. 59 00:02:16,530 --> 00:02:18,130 So this is just a little outline. 60 00:02:18,130 --> 00:02:19,370 I'm going to talk a little bit about what 61 00:02:19,370 --> 00:02:20,860 the structure of cartilage is. 62 00:02:20,860 --> 00:02:23,080 We have a little schematic of that. 63 00:02:23,080 --> 00:02:25,640 Then talk about how small defects in cartilage 64 00:02:25,640 --> 00:02:26,670 are currently treated. 65 00:02:26,670 --> 00:02:28,997 So these are things that, say you're an athlete, 66 00:02:28,997 --> 00:02:31,080 you might tear some cartilage, that kind of thing, 67 00:02:31,080 --> 00:02:33,530 not like you have osteoarthritis and you need a new knee. 68 00:02:33,530 --> 00:02:34,742 It's not going to do that. 69 00:02:34,742 --> 00:02:36,450 So I'll talk a little bit about cartilage 70 00:02:36,450 --> 00:02:37,870 and the current treatments. 71 00:02:37,870 --> 00:02:39,286 I'll talk about some of the things 72 00:02:39,286 --> 00:02:42,760 we thought about in making an osteochondral scaffold, 73 00:02:42,760 --> 00:02:44,900 like what parameters were important. 74 00:02:44,900 --> 00:02:47,440 And we based it on that collagen-GAG scaffold 75 00:02:47,440 --> 00:02:49,040 that I talked about last time. 76 00:02:49,040 --> 00:02:50,920 So the collagen glycoseaminoglycan 77 00:02:50,920 --> 00:02:52,694 scaffold that we talked about last time. 78 00:02:52,694 --> 00:02:54,110 And what we did was we had a layer 79 00:02:54,110 --> 00:02:57,120 that was a collagen based scaffold for the cartilage 80 00:02:57,120 --> 00:02:58,610 and we had another layer that was 81 00:02:58,610 --> 00:03:00,180 a mineralized version of that. 82 00:03:00,180 --> 00:03:02,221 And one of the main things we did in this project 83 00:03:02,221 --> 00:03:04,260 was figure out how to mineralize that scaffold. 84 00:03:04,260 --> 00:03:07,170 And then we made this two-layer osteochondral scaffold. 85 00:03:07,170 --> 00:03:09,280 So I'll talk about that, OK? 86 00:03:09,280 --> 00:03:12,030 So are we good? 87 00:03:12,030 --> 00:03:15,540 So this is a schematic of articular cartilage. 88 00:03:15,540 --> 00:03:17,990 Articular just means it's in a joint, so between 89 00:03:17,990 --> 00:03:20,410 like, say, two of your long bones, 90 00:03:20,410 --> 00:03:21,650 and there's several regions. 91 00:03:21,650 --> 00:03:25,030 So this shows both the cartilage and the bone underneath it. 92 00:03:25,030 --> 00:03:28,930 And so this top layer is called the superficial layer, 93 00:03:28,930 --> 00:03:30,410 and then there's a transition zone, 94 00:03:30,410 --> 00:03:32,590 and then there's this deep cartilage here. 95 00:03:32,590 --> 00:03:36,040 And the little white lines represent how the collagen 96 00:03:36,040 --> 00:03:38,540 is oriented in the cartilage. 97 00:03:38,540 --> 00:03:40,380 So the collagen is oriented, more or less, 98 00:03:40,380 --> 00:03:43,610 vertically here and then it becomes more kind of woven 99 00:03:43,610 --> 00:03:45,940 and horizontal towards the top. 100 00:03:45,940 --> 00:03:48,430 And so those three different zones, 101 00:03:48,430 --> 00:03:50,670 the collagen is oriented differently. 102 00:03:50,670 --> 00:03:54,080 Then there's a region down here called the tidemark. 103 00:03:54,080 --> 00:03:58,140 Everything above here is just cartilage and everything below 104 00:03:58,140 --> 00:04:00,430 is calcified to some extent. 105 00:04:00,430 --> 00:04:04,780 So this next layer down here it's more cartilage-like, 106 00:04:04,780 --> 00:04:09,300 but it's got some calcification in it as well. 107 00:04:09,300 --> 00:04:10,900 And then here's the compact bone. 108 00:04:10,900 --> 00:04:12,540 They call it subchondral bone. 109 00:04:12,540 --> 00:04:14,290 It's the bone below the cartilage. 110 00:04:14,290 --> 00:04:15,890 So chondral is cartilage. 111 00:04:15,890 --> 00:04:17,390 And then here's the trabecular bone. 112 00:04:17,390 --> 00:04:22,019 We talked about trabecular bone a couple of weeks ago, OK? 113 00:04:22,019 --> 00:04:24,540 So one of the things is there's different types of collagen 114 00:04:24,540 --> 00:04:27,900 and the different types may have slightly different fiber 115 00:04:27,900 --> 00:04:31,774 structures or slightly different compositions. 116 00:04:31,774 --> 00:04:34,190 They're all related, but they're slightly different types. 117 00:04:34,190 --> 00:04:36,870 And bone has what's called type I collagen and cartilage 118 00:04:36,870 --> 00:04:39,460 has type II collagen. So when we made the scaffold, 119 00:04:39,460 --> 00:04:41,350 we wanted the bony layer to be made 120 00:04:41,350 --> 00:04:45,140 with type I and the cartilage layer to be made with type II. 121 00:04:45,140 --> 00:04:47,870 So I think with the 3032 people have probably seen it. 122 00:04:47,870 --> 00:04:49,640 I think I did a version of this for you 123 00:04:49,640 --> 00:04:52,060 guys, didn't I at the end of term, something? 124 00:04:52,060 --> 00:04:56,910 Yeah, but there's other people, so it's really for them. 125 00:04:56,910 --> 00:05:02,040 So if you think of articular cartilage, 126 00:05:02,040 --> 00:05:05,289 it has difficulty repairing itself and one of the reasons 127 00:05:05,289 --> 00:05:06,830 that it's difficult for the cartilage 128 00:05:06,830 --> 00:05:10,340 to repair itself is that there's no blood supply in it 129 00:05:10,340 --> 00:05:14,160 and another reason is that there's not very many cells. 130 00:05:14,160 --> 00:05:17,080 So chondrocytes are the cells in cartilage 131 00:05:17,080 --> 00:05:19,450 and if there's a low volume fraction of the cells, 132 00:05:19,450 --> 00:05:21,860 then it's not so easy for that small number of cells 133 00:05:21,860 --> 00:05:24,760 to actually produce the extracellular matrix, which 134 00:05:24,760 --> 00:05:26,740 is kind of what you think of as the cartilage. 135 00:05:26,740 --> 00:05:29,745 And it can be damaged, either as I said, from sports injuries, 136 00:05:29,745 --> 00:05:31,370 typically that's what young people get, 137 00:05:31,370 --> 00:05:34,930 they tear their cartilage in some sporting injury accident, 138 00:05:34,930 --> 00:05:36,500 or from osteoarthritis. 139 00:05:36,500 --> 00:05:38,180 So these scaffolds we're talking about, 140 00:05:38,180 --> 00:05:41,080 they're not really meant to repair large amounts 141 00:05:41,080 --> 00:05:43,780 of cartilage that are damaged. 142 00:05:43,780 --> 00:05:46,020 And as I said, the cartilage has a poor capacity 143 00:05:46,020 --> 00:05:48,097 for self-repair. 144 00:05:48,097 --> 00:05:49,680 So there's several treatments, there's 145 00:05:49,680 --> 00:05:52,190 three treatments that are given currently 146 00:05:52,190 --> 00:05:55,225 and the most common one is called marrow stimulation. 147 00:05:55,225 --> 00:05:56,850 And some of these orthopedic treatments 148 00:05:56,850 --> 00:05:59,490 are fairly crude when you look at it. 149 00:05:59,490 --> 00:06:02,480 So this marrow stimulation, what's involved 150 00:06:02,480 --> 00:06:03,390 is they take a drill. 151 00:06:03,390 --> 00:06:04,302 So here's the drill. 152 00:06:04,302 --> 00:06:06,260 And they basically drill through the cartilage. 153 00:06:06,260 --> 00:06:08,116 So this would be the cartilage layer here. 154 00:06:08,116 --> 00:06:09,490 And they drill down into the bone 155 00:06:09,490 --> 00:06:11,615 and they want to get down into the trabecular bone. 156 00:06:11,615 --> 00:06:13,250 So they want to go below the cortical 157 00:06:13,250 --> 00:06:15,250 or the subchondral bone and they want to go down 158 00:06:15,250 --> 00:06:17,674 into the trabecular bone. 159 00:06:17,674 --> 00:06:20,090 And the reason they want to do that is the trabecular bone 160 00:06:20,090 --> 00:06:21,910 has bone marrow in it and the bone marrow 161 00:06:21,910 --> 00:06:23,860 has mesenchymal stem cells, and they 162 00:06:23,860 --> 00:06:26,100 want those mesenchymal stem cells to move up 163 00:06:26,100 --> 00:06:27,670 into the cartilage layer. 164 00:06:27,670 --> 00:06:29,830 So that's what this red glob is here. 165 00:06:29,830 --> 00:06:31,900 The idea is that you've made a hole 166 00:06:31,900 --> 00:06:33,780 and now that hole is going to fill up 167 00:06:33,780 --> 00:06:36,350 with a blood clot, which will have these mesenchymal stem 168 00:06:36,350 --> 00:06:40,900 cells, and that those will form cartilage. 169 00:06:40,900 --> 00:06:45,900 So it does work to some extent, but it's not really 170 00:06:45,900 --> 00:06:49,430 a great result. There's something like 75,000 171 00:06:49,430 --> 00:06:50,390 of these done a year. 172 00:06:50,390 --> 00:06:54,590 As I said, this is the most common kind of repair. 173 00:06:54,590 --> 00:06:58,580 The next most sophisticated type of repair, what they do 174 00:06:58,580 --> 00:07:01,650 is they take plugs of bone and cartilage from another place. 175 00:07:01,650 --> 00:07:03,080 So say this is where the defect is 176 00:07:03,080 --> 00:07:04,660 and they want to repair that. 177 00:07:04,660 --> 00:07:07,240 They take bone and cartilage from this spot up here. 178 00:07:07,240 --> 00:07:10,040 So they sort of drill out little cylindrical cores 179 00:07:10,040 --> 00:07:12,510 and then they plug them into this bit here. 180 00:07:12,510 --> 00:07:15,380 And that's called an osteochondral autograft. 181 00:07:15,380 --> 00:07:17,550 Sometimes it's called mosaicplasty 182 00:07:17,550 --> 00:07:19,826 because they build up a little mosaic from all 183 00:07:19,826 --> 00:07:22,179 those little pieces. 184 00:07:22,179 --> 00:07:23,970 And then they just leave these donor sites, 185 00:07:23,970 --> 00:07:26,550 where they took the plugs from, they just leave those empty. 186 00:07:26,550 --> 00:07:30,650 So they try to take the bone and cartilage from regions where 187 00:07:30,650 --> 00:07:32,770 the loads are lower, but they end up 188 00:07:32,770 --> 00:07:35,990 leaving holes, which is not so desirable. 189 00:07:35,990 --> 00:07:38,370 And again, those holes may fill a little bit 190 00:07:38,370 --> 00:07:42,600 by the previous mechanism. 191 00:07:42,600 --> 00:07:45,820 Then the most fancy method that they use now 192 00:07:45,820 --> 00:07:48,860 is called autologous chondrocyte implantation. 193 00:07:48,860 --> 00:07:51,020 So what they do is they harvest cartilage cells 194 00:07:51,020 --> 00:07:52,670 from the patient. 195 00:07:52,670 --> 00:07:55,040 They then take them to a lab and they culture them 196 00:07:55,040 --> 00:07:56,560 for two or three weeks and they get 197 00:07:56,560 --> 00:07:59,370 them to multiply and proliferate and grow 198 00:07:59,370 --> 00:08:01,890 and then they re-implant the cells. 199 00:08:01,890 --> 00:08:05,930 So this works fairly well, but the difficulty 200 00:08:05,930 --> 00:08:09,090 is it involves two surgeries, so one to get the cells out 201 00:08:09,090 --> 00:08:11,190 and one to put them back in, and there's 202 00:08:11,190 --> 00:08:12,619 the cost of the cell culture. 203 00:08:12,619 --> 00:08:15,160 So this is a much more expensive procedure because of the two 204 00:08:15,160 --> 00:08:18,340 surgeries and the cost of doing the cell culture, 205 00:08:18,340 --> 00:08:21,010 but I think it's the method that works the best. 206 00:08:21,010 --> 00:08:25,550 And when I talked about this in 3032, I mentioned Dara Torres. 207 00:08:25,550 --> 00:08:27,670 Dara Torres is an Olympic swimmer. 208 00:08:27,670 --> 00:08:29,134 She's 47. 209 00:08:29,134 --> 00:08:30,550 She began swimming in the Olympics 210 00:08:30,550 --> 00:08:33,370 in 1984, more than 30 years ago. 211 00:08:33,370 --> 00:08:35,039 And she has swum in the Olympics, 212 00:08:35,039 --> 00:08:37,750 not every one, but up until 2008. 213 00:08:37,750 --> 00:08:40,669 And even 2008, she won three silvers that year. 214 00:08:40,669 --> 00:08:42,299 She was, I think, the oldest person 215 00:08:42,299 --> 00:08:44,740 who's ever won a medal in the Olympics. 216 00:08:44,740 --> 00:08:49,420 And she had this surgery done at the Brigham a few years ago. 217 00:08:49,420 --> 00:08:51,054 And it used to be, they've stopped 218 00:08:51,054 --> 00:08:53,220 running these commercials but the Brigham for a time 219 00:08:53,220 --> 00:08:56,070 was running these commercials, that featured Dara Torres 220 00:08:56,070 --> 00:09:00,270 and saying basically that she had this surgery done there. 221 00:09:00,270 --> 00:09:03,180 I'm assuming she was happy with it. 222 00:09:03,180 --> 00:09:05,526 OK, so that's what they do currently 223 00:09:05,526 --> 00:09:08,150 and what we were thinking of and what other groups have thought 224 00:09:08,150 --> 00:09:12,480 about is could you repair damage in the cartilage 225 00:09:12,480 --> 00:09:14,860 by using a tissue engineering scaffold? 226 00:09:14,860 --> 00:09:16,360 So what we were thinking about when 227 00:09:16,360 --> 00:09:19,750 we tried to do this project was we 228 00:09:19,750 --> 00:09:23,130 wanted to use a healthy articular cartilage joint 229 00:09:23,130 --> 00:09:25,740 as a model for our scaffold. 230 00:09:25,740 --> 00:09:29,260 We wanted to have a layer that would go down into the bone 231 00:09:29,260 --> 00:09:32,100 so that you would have access to those mesenchymal stem cells. 232 00:09:32,100 --> 00:09:34,780 And that's why we wanted an osteochondral scaffold, 233 00:09:34,780 --> 00:09:37,190 so that we would have a layer for the cartilage 234 00:09:37,190 --> 00:09:39,730 but also a layer that would go down into the bone. 235 00:09:39,730 --> 00:09:42,810 We wanted to be able to control scaffold parameters, things 236 00:09:42,810 --> 00:09:45,460 like the mineral content and the pore size. 237 00:09:45,460 --> 00:09:47,970 Remember, I said these tissue engineering scaffolds, 238 00:09:47,970 --> 00:09:49,750 the pore size is one of the parameters, 239 00:09:49,750 --> 00:09:53,080 that you want to have the pore size in a certain range. 240 00:09:53,080 --> 00:09:54,700 And we wanted to use materials that 241 00:09:54,700 --> 00:09:57,990 would be appropriate for approval 242 00:09:57,990 --> 00:09:59,711 from things like the FDA. 243 00:09:59,711 --> 00:10:02,210 So typically, when people make tissue engineering scaffolds, 244 00:10:02,210 --> 00:10:03,660 they don't start with some material that's 245 00:10:03,660 --> 00:10:04,650 never been approved before. 246 00:10:04,650 --> 00:10:05,800 They start with something that already 247 00:10:05,800 --> 00:10:07,550 has approval for something else and that's 248 00:10:07,550 --> 00:10:09,440 what we wanted to do too. 249 00:10:09,440 --> 00:10:12,500 So this was our idea of what we wanted the scaffold 250 00:10:12,500 --> 00:10:13,100 to look like. 251 00:10:13,100 --> 00:10:16,380 We wanted an unmineralized type II collagen scaffold up here 252 00:10:16,380 --> 00:10:17,880 that would be for the cartilage. 253 00:10:17,880 --> 00:10:20,900 We wanted a mineralized type I collagen scaffold down there 254 00:10:20,900 --> 00:10:22,300 for the bone. 255 00:10:22,300 --> 00:10:23,750 And we wanted some region that had 256 00:10:23,750 --> 00:10:26,150 some gradient in mineralization because it 257 00:10:26,150 --> 00:10:28,309 would be like that layer of cartilage that 258 00:10:28,309 --> 00:10:29,350 was slightly mineralized. 259 00:10:29,350 --> 00:10:31,920 So we wanted to duplicate that whole structure. 260 00:10:31,920 --> 00:10:34,384 So that was our picture of what we wanted to do 261 00:10:34,384 --> 00:10:37,050 and we had a pretty good idea of how we were going to make this. 262 00:10:37,050 --> 00:10:38,841 We were just going to use that same process 263 00:10:38,841 --> 00:10:41,540 that [INAUDIBLE] developed for the skin scaffolds. 264 00:10:41,540 --> 00:10:43,000 He was involved with this project 265 00:10:43,000 --> 00:10:45,760 but just used type II collagen instead of type I. 266 00:10:45,760 --> 00:10:47,730 The challenge was really figuring out 267 00:10:47,730 --> 00:10:50,820 how to make the mineralized collagen scaffold 268 00:10:50,820 --> 00:10:54,410 and then how to get this gradient in the mineralization 269 00:10:54,410 --> 00:10:56,442 between the two layers. 270 00:10:56,442 --> 00:10:58,150 So this, I think, I showed you last time. 271 00:10:58,150 --> 00:10:59,899 So this is just the method we used to make 272 00:10:59,899 --> 00:11:01,220 the collagen-GAG scaffold. 273 00:11:01,220 --> 00:11:04,290 So we take type II collagen. We put it in acetic acid. 274 00:11:04,290 --> 00:11:06,670 Remember, that destroys the periodic banding 275 00:11:06,670 --> 00:11:10,880 of the collagen and it improves the immunological response. 276 00:11:10,880 --> 00:11:13,440 We add the chondroitin 6-sulfate, the GAG, 277 00:11:13,440 --> 00:11:14,640 to crosslink it. 278 00:11:14,640 --> 00:11:16,800 We then just make a slurry out of that. 279 00:11:16,800 --> 00:11:18,000 So we mix that all together. 280 00:11:18,000 --> 00:11:19,640 We keep it as a slurry. 281 00:11:19,640 --> 00:11:21,490 And then the second stage is you put 282 00:11:21,490 --> 00:11:24,200 the slurry or the suspension into a pan, 283 00:11:24,200 --> 00:11:25,970 and then you do the freeze drying process. 284 00:11:25,970 --> 00:11:27,469 So you go through this process where 285 00:11:27,469 --> 00:11:29,200 you start at this room temperature 286 00:11:29,200 --> 00:11:30,660 and atmospheric pressure. 287 00:11:30,660 --> 00:11:33,290 You cool it down to freeze it, and then you sublimate it, 288 00:11:33,290 --> 00:11:38,560 and you're left with a very porous collagen-GAG scaffold. 289 00:11:38,560 --> 00:11:39,700 So these are pictures. 290 00:11:39,700 --> 00:11:41,370 I think this was with a type I collagen, 291 00:11:41,370 --> 00:11:44,120 but it looks the same with the type II collagen. 292 00:11:44,120 --> 00:11:47,251 So that's what the structure looks like. 293 00:11:47,251 --> 00:11:48,750 I think I showed you this last time. 294 00:11:48,750 --> 00:11:51,120 We can control the pore size by controlling 295 00:11:51,120 --> 00:11:52,540 the freezing temperature. 296 00:11:52,540 --> 00:11:54,020 So the way the freeze dryer works 297 00:11:54,020 --> 00:11:56,880 is there is shelves that you put these pans on, 298 00:11:56,880 --> 00:11:59,909 and these cooling elements go through the shelves, 299 00:11:59,909 --> 00:12:01,950 and you can set the temperature of those shelves. 300 00:12:01,950 --> 00:12:05,300 So we would set the temperature of those shelves 301 00:12:05,300 --> 00:12:07,822 to different values and we got different pore sizes. 302 00:12:07,822 --> 00:12:09,280 So the colder the shelf temperature 303 00:12:09,280 --> 00:12:14,330 was, the faster the freezing, and the smaller 304 00:12:14,330 --> 00:12:16,130 the size of the ice grains, and then 305 00:12:16,130 --> 00:12:19,010 the smaller the size of the pores. 306 00:12:19,010 --> 00:12:21,280 And this is just the mechanical response again. 307 00:12:21,280 --> 00:12:23,350 So we did mechanical tests on it. 308 00:12:23,350 --> 00:12:26,010 These are some of the numbers for the properties. 309 00:12:26,010 --> 00:12:27,900 So we tested it dry and wet, and we 310 00:12:27,900 --> 00:12:30,391 measured a modulus and a buckling collapse stress 311 00:12:30,391 --> 00:12:30,890 for it. 312 00:12:30,890 --> 00:12:33,560 So those are just some values there. 313 00:12:33,560 --> 00:12:36,440 And then it came to making the mineralized collagen-GAG 314 00:12:36,440 --> 00:12:40,250 scaffold, and one of the students in Cambridge, England 315 00:12:40,250 --> 00:12:43,937 was really the main person who did this, Andrew Lynn. 316 00:12:43,937 --> 00:12:45,520 And he worked with Brendan Harley, who 317 00:12:45,520 --> 00:12:48,290 was our student here, and after they graduated, 318 00:12:48,290 --> 00:12:49,900 I had another student, Biraja Kanungo, 319 00:12:49,900 --> 00:12:51,370 who worked on this too. 320 00:12:51,370 --> 00:12:53,790 So Andrew Lynn really developed this technique. 321 00:12:53,790 --> 00:12:56,260 And this involved taking the collagen and the GAG, so 322 00:12:56,260 --> 00:12:58,185 the same as for the other scaffold, 323 00:12:58,185 --> 00:13:00,560 but this time, if we want to make a mineralized scaffold, 324 00:13:00,560 --> 00:13:02,850 we somehow have to get calcium phosphate into it. 325 00:13:02,850 --> 00:13:05,760 So it's got to have sort of a hydroxyapatite-ish type 326 00:13:05,760 --> 00:13:07,940 of component to it. 327 00:13:07,940 --> 00:13:12,180 So this time we used phosphoric acid instead of the acetic acid 328 00:13:12,180 --> 00:13:15,680 and we put some calcium salts into the mixture as well. 329 00:13:15,680 --> 00:13:18,820 And Andrew was really the one who figured out how to do this 330 00:13:18,820 --> 00:13:20,350 and what salts to use. 331 00:13:20,350 --> 00:13:21,970 And then the process was very similar. 332 00:13:21,970 --> 00:13:23,330 So we have this slurry. 333 00:13:23,330 --> 00:13:24,830 We mix the slurry up. 334 00:13:24,830 --> 00:13:27,110 We did a freeze drying process, and then we 335 00:13:27,110 --> 00:13:29,980 crosslinked it with a chemical crosslinker called EDAC. 336 00:13:29,980 --> 00:13:31,950 So it's just a chemical that you put into this 337 00:13:31,950 --> 00:13:33,560 and it crosslinks it all. 338 00:13:33,560 --> 00:13:37,350 So that was how we made the mineralized scaffold. 339 00:13:37,350 --> 00:13:39,640 The mineral we got was something called brushite, 340 00:13:39,640 --> 00:13:41,890 which is a calcium phosphate, but it's not exactly 341 00:13:41,890 --> 00:13:43,840 the same as hydroxyapatite. 342 00:13:43,840 --> 00:13:46,590 And we could control the amount of brushite 343 00:13:46,590 --> 00:13:48,840 by different weight fractions or volume fractions 344 00:13:48,840 --> 00:13:51,190 by controlling how much of the calcium salts we put in 345 00:13:51,190 --> 00:13:54,630 and what the molarity of the phosphoric acid was. 346 00:13:54,630 --> 00:13:56,670 If you take brushite and you put it in water, 347 00:13:56,670 --> 00:13:59,040 it then converts to octacalcium phosphate 348 00:13:59,040 --> 00:14:01,900 and then to apatite by a hydrolytic conversion. 349 00:14:01,900 --> 00:14:06,360 So the apatite is related to the hydroxyapatite in bone. 350 00:14:06,360 --> 00:14:08,670 And this was the structure of the mineralized scaffold 351 00:14:08,670 --> 00:14:09,610 that we got. 352 00:14:09,610 --> 00:14:11,360 So you can see it looks a little different 353 00:14:11,360 --> 00:14:13,440 from the collagen-GAG scaffold. 354 00:14:13,440 --> 00:14:14,380 It's much denser. 355 00:14:14,380 --> 00:14:17,220 Typically, the densities were like 5% or 10% dense. 356 00:14:17,220 --> 00:14:19,740 And remember, the collagen scaffold was 0.5% dense. 357 00:14:19,740 --> 00:14:21,529 So it's a lot denser. 358 00:14:21,529 --> 00:14:23,820 But if you notice, there's a few things to notice here. 359 00:14:23,820 --> 00:14:27,300 So one is the pore size, that's a 500 micron bar. 360 00:14:27,300 --> 00:14:31,000 And we could make pores between about 50 and 1,000 microns, 361 00:14:31,000 --> 00:14:32,980 depending on the freezing conditions. 362 00:14:32,980 --> 00:14:35,190 And the range of pore sizes we were shooting for 363 00:14:35,190 --> 00:14:36,860 was somewhere between 100 and 500, 364 00:14:36,860 --> 00:14:38,390 so we could get in the right ballpark with that. 365 00:14:38,390 --> 00:14:40,306 And you can see, just looking at that picture, 366 00:14:40,306 --> 00:14:42,200 if that's 500 microns, those pores 367 00:14:42,200 --> 00:14:44,400 are somewhere of that order. 368 00:14:44,400 --> 00:14:47,480 Another thing to look at is this image here, 369 00:14:47,480 --> 00:14:50,000 and this just shows, the white little dots 370 00:14:50,000 --> 00:14:52,500 are the calcium phosphate mineral, 371 00:14:52,500 --> 00:14:53,980 and it just shows that the mineral 372 00:14:53,980 --> 00:14:56,240 is uniformly distributed throughout the thickness 373 00:14:56,240 --> 00:14:57,430 of the scaffold. 374 00:14:57,430 --> 00:15:00,330 So some people had tried to make scaffolds for regenerating bone 375 00:15:00,330 --> 00:15:03,200 where they take, say, one of those polymers 376 00:15:03,200 --> 00:15:05,060 for resorbable sutures or they take collagen 377 00:15:05,060 --> 00:15:07,460 and they coat it with hydroxyapatite, 378 00:15:07,460 --> 00:15:11,230 but the shortcoming of that is that the scaffold is 379 00:15:11,230 --> 00:15:12,519 going to resorb over time. 380 00:15:12,519 --> 00:15:14,810 The cells are going to secrete enzymes, which are going 381 00:15:14,810 --> 00:15:16,420 to eat away at the scaffold. 382 00:15:16,420 --> 00:15:18,350 And if the scaffold resorbs, you're 383 00:15:18,350 --> 00:15:20,110 eating away at the hydroxyapatite first 384 00:15:20,110 --> 00:15:21,526 and then you're left with whatever 385 00:15:21,526 --> 00:15:23,050 polymer is underneath that. 386 00:15:23,050 --> 00:15:26,032 Whereas this gives you a more uniform composition 387 00:15:26,032 --> 00:15:27,740 throughout the thickness of the scaffold, 388 00:15:27,740 --> 00:15:29,870 and you've got calcium phosphate everywhere 389 00:15:29,870 --> 00:15:32,880 throughout the thickness of the struts in the scaffold. 390 00:15:32,880 --> 00:15:35,470 So that's the structure of that. 391 00:15:35,470 --> 00:15:38,550 We wanted to make sure that the mineral was uniformly 392 00:15:38,550 --> 00:15:40,840 distributed throughout the scaffold, 393 00:15:40,840 --> 00:15:43,390 and we did some micro-CT imaging, some micro computer 394 00:15:43,390 --> 00:15:44,700 tomography. 395 00:15:44,700 --> 00:15:47,100 And this is our sample here, and this red line just 396 00:15:47,100 --> 00:15:51,300 says that is the plane at which this image was taken, 397 00:15:51,300 --> 00:15:53,170 and the black is the mineral. 398 00:15:53,170 --> 00:15:55,640 And then here's a lower plane and here's another image. 399 00:15:55,640 --> 00:15:58,540 And you can see the calcium phosphate's pretty uniformly 400 00:15:58,540 --> 00:16:02,020 distributed throughout that specimen there. 401 00:16:02,020 --> 00:16:05,860 And this was just another way of looking at the same thing using 402 00:16:05,860 --> 00:16:08,924 EDX in an SEM to look at where the calcium was 403 00:16:08,924 --> 00:16:10,090 and where the phosphate was. 404 00:16:10,090 --> 00:16:13,830 So again, this is uniform distribution of the mineral. 405 00:16:13,830 --> 00:16:16,530 We did mechanical tests on these scaffold as well. 406 00:16:16,530 --> 00:16:19,437 So we measured moduli and collapse stresses. 407 00:16:19,437 --> 00:16:21,520 We get the same kind of stress strain curve as all 408 00:16:21,520 --> 00:16:24,340 these other cellular solids. 409 00:16:24,340 --> 00:16:26,560 This was done by- Biraja Kanungo was 410 00:16:26,560 --> 00:16:29,220 the student who did this bit. 411 00:16:29,220 --> 00:16:31,590 One of the things we found was that 412 00:16:31,590 --> 00:16:33,510 with these mineralized scaffolds you 413 00:16:33,510 --> 00:16:35,290 could manually compress them. 414 00:16:35,290 --> 00:16:38,300 If you pushed them down and you hydrated them, 415 00:16:38,300 --> 00:16:40,970 they would recover all the deformation, 416 00:16:40,970 --> 00:16:42,730 but we were increased in improving 417 00:16:42,730 --> 00:16:45,820 the mechanical properties of the mineralized scaffold 418 00:16:45,820 --> 00:16:48,250 for improved handling during surgery. 419 00:16:48,250 --> 00:16:51,610 And there's another reason that I'll get to as well. 420 00:16:51,610 --> 00:16:54,230 So the second reason is that, if you 421 00:16:54,230 --> 00:16:56,140 look at how bone itself forms, it 422 00:16:56,140 --> 00:17:01,964 forms from a collagen precursor, so bone in your body. 423 00:17:01,964 --> 00:17:03,505 And there's something called osteoid, 424 00:17:03,505 --> 00:17:07,470 which is this collagen-based precursor to bone, 425 00:17:07,470 --> 00:17:11,569 and it has a modulus of about 25 to 40 kilopascals 426 00:17:11,569 --> 00:17:14,880 and Angler showed that if you have mesenchymal stem cells 427 00:17:14,880 --> 00:17:17,230 and you put them on substrates of different stiffnesses, 428 00:17:17,230 --> 00:17:19,637 they differentiate into different kinds of cells, 429 00:17:19,637 --> 00:17:21,470 depending on the stiffness of the substrate. 430 00:17:21,470 --> 00:17:23,980 So the substrate stiffness can affect what kind of cells 431 00:17:23,980 --> 00:17:25,075 you get. 432 00:17:25,075 --> 00:17:26,700 And the idea here was we thought, well, 433 00:17:26,700 --> 00:17:29,960 if we could get a stiffness that was close to this osteoid, what 434 00:17:29,960 --> 00:17:32,620 the natural bone formation has, then 435 00:17:32,620 --> 00:17:34,670 that might help the mesenchymal stem 436 00:17:34,670 --> 00:17:37,490 cells differentiate into the bony cells 437 00:17:37,490 --> 00:17:38,510 that we want them to. 438 00:17:38,510 --> 00:17:40,700 So we wanted to try to reach a stiffness of this 439 00:17:40,700 --> 00:17:42,020 in the wet state. 440 00:17:42,020 --> 00:17:44,160 And if I back up here, you can see the stiffness 441 00:17:44,160 --> 00:17:47,690 we had was around four in the wet state, four kilopascals 442 00:17:47,690 --> 00:17:52,040 and we want to get to 30 or 40, something like that. 443 00:17:52,040 --> 00:17:56,100 So these are our equations for the modeling 444 00:17:56,100 --> 00:17:59,370 of the mineralized scaffold, the open celled foam 445 00:17:59,370 --> 00:18:02,730 models for the modulus and for the collapse strength. 446 00:18:02,730 --> 00:18:04,490 So we could change different things. 447 00:18:04,490 --> 00:18:06,054 We could change the solid properties 448 00:18:06,054 --> 00:18:07,720 or we could change the relative density. 449 00:18:07,720 --> 00:18:09,740 The geometry of the thing is probably not 450 00:18:09,740 --> 00:18:11,116 going to help us too much. 451 00:18:11,116 --> 00:18:12,490 So basically, that's what we did. 452 00:18:12,490 --> 00:18:15,879 We first started off trying to increase the mineral content. 453 00:18:15,879 --> 00:18:17,920 We thought if there was more mineral content that 454 00:18:17,920 --> 00:18:19,160 would make it stiffer. 455 00:18:19,160 --> 00:18:24,210 So Biraja made these more highly mineralized scaffolds and these 456 00:18:24,210 --> 00:18:27,800 are just some SEM images of those. 457 00:18:27,800 --> 00:18:30,190 But the thing he found was that the properties actually 458 00:18:30,190 --> 00:18:32,840 got worse when he had the more highly mineralized scaffold. 459 00:18:32,840 --> 00:18:35,300 The modulus went down and the strength went down, 460 00:18:35,300 --> 00:18:37,595 so that wasn't very helpful. 461 00:18:37,595 --> 00:18:39,220 And when he looked into it more detail, 462 00:18:39,220 --> 00:18:41,490 he found that he had more voids in the cell walls 463 00:18:41,490 --> 00:18:43,990 and he had more disconnected walls. 464 00:18:43,990 --> 00:18:45,980 This shows some of the micrographs, 465 00:18:45,980 --> 00:18:48,220 so this isn't really very quantitative, 466 00:18:48,220 --> 00:18:49,820 but you can see there's holes here. 467 00:18:49,820 --> 00:18:51,320 There's a few holes here, but there 468 00:18:51,320 --> 00:18:54,060 tended to be a bigger volume fraction of holes in the more 469 00:18:54,060 --> 00:18:57,280 highly mineralized scaffolds and more walls that 470 00:18:57,280 --> 00:18:58,520 were disconnected. 471 00:18:58,520 --> 00:19:00,780 So we realized increasing the mineral content wasn't 472 00:19:00,780 --> 00:19:02,204 going to work very well. 473 00:19:02,204 --> 00:19:03,620 And then the second thing he tried 474 00:19:03,620 --> 00:19:05,630 was increasing the relative density. 475 00:19:05,630 --> 00:19:10,040 So we started off at this density of 4 1/2% dense and he 476 00:19:10,040 --> 00:19:13,320 developed a method of increasing the relative density up 477 00:19:13,320 --> 00:19:16,110 to about almost 20% here. 478 00:19:16,110 --> 00:19:18,090 He did this by, first of all, he tried 479 00:19:18,090 --> 00:19:20,280 to just mix more of the constituents 480 00:19:20,280 --> 00:19:22,990 into the slurry, that's kind of the most obvious thing. 481 00:19:22,990 --> 00:19:24,670 But as you add more constituents, 482 00:19:24,670 --> 00:19:27,250 it gets harder and harder to mix the thing up and have 483 00:19:27,250 --> 00:19:29,490 it homogeneously distributed. 484 00:19:29,490 --> 00:19:32,070 So in the end, that's not how he made these things. 485 00:19:32,070 --> 00:19:34,240 He started with the starting mixture 486 00:19:34,240 --> 00:19:36,970 and then he had a vacuum system for sucking water out of it. 487 00:19:36,970 --> 00:19:38,670 So he would reduce the amount of water, 488 00:19:38,670 --> 00:19:40,780 which essentially increased the amount of solids 489 00:19:40,780 --> 00:19:41,940 that was in there. 490 00:19:41,940 --> 00:19:44,010 And you can see in this last one here, 491 00:19:44,010 --> 00:19:46,530 the most dense scaffold, he was sucking 492 00:19:46,530 --> 00:19:48,940 the water in one direction, and he sucked it 493 00:19:48,940 --> 00:19:51,420 so much that he was starting to get the cells collapsing. 494 00:19:51,420 --> 00:19:54,030 So this one here, these cells that 495 00:19:54,030 --> 00:19:56,071 have this sort of elongated orientation, that's 496 00:19:56,071 --> 00:19:57,820 because the cells are starting to collapse 497 00:19:57,820 --> 00:20:00,301 because of the vacuum that he was applying. 498 00:20:00,301 --> 00:20:02,050 But he could get a pretty good difference. 499 00:20:02,050 --> 00:20:03,410 This was almost 5%. 500 00:20:03,410 --> 00:20:06,640 That's almost 20%, so roughly a factor of four. 501 00:20:06,640 --> 00:20:09,550 There are, yeah, four difference between them. 502 00:20:09,550 --> 00:20:11,320 So then he did mechanical tests too, 503 00:20:11,320 --> 00:20:13,660 and he measured the relative density. 504 00:20:13,660 --> 00:20:18,240 Here's the moduli wet and then the strength dry 505 00:20:18,240 --> 00:20:20,140 and the strength wet. 506 00:20:20,140 --> 00:20:22,350 So you can see here, if you look at the dry moduli, 507 00:20:22,350 --> 00:20:25,280 for instance, when you go from this relative density 508 00:20:25,280 --> 00:20:28,970 to that relative density, from about 14% to 19%, 509 00:20:28,970 --> 00:20:30,910 the modulus actually drops down. 510 00:20:30,910 --> 00:20:32,680 And if you look at the structure, I think, 511 00:20:32,680 --> 00:20:35,140 it's because you've got this flattened structure here. 512 00:20:35,140 --> 00:20:37,720 You've collapsed the cells a bit already. 513 00:20:37,720 --> 00:20:39,810 So there's a maximum density that you 514 00:20:39,810 --> 00:20:44,510 might want to go to, probably somewhere around 14% or 15%. 515 00:20:44,510 --> 00:20:46,510 But the wet modulus we've got here 516 00:20:46,510 --> 00:20:50,110 is around 35 kilopascals, so that's close to the target 517 00:20:50,110 --> 00:20:50,610 that we had. 518 00:20:50,610 --> 00:20:52,390 It's close to what we wanted to have. 519 00:20:52,390 --> 00:20:53,940 So one way you could get the right 520 00:20:53,940 --> 00:20:58,610 or the appropriate modulus is by increasing the density 521 00:20:58,610 --> 00:21:00,020 to that value. 522 00:21:00,020 --> 00:21:02,630 Another way is by playing around with the crosslinking. 523 00:21:02,630 --> 00:21:06,020 So those values were for non-crosslinked scaffolds. 524 00:21:06,020 --> 00:21:10,720 So here, this is the 14% dense scaffold wet, non-crosslinked 525 00:21:10,720 --> 00:21:13,020 it was around 35 kilopascals. 526 00:21:13,020 --> 00:21:15,370 This is a dehydrothermal treatment, 527 00:21:15,370 --> 00:21:17,560 just basically heating it up. 528 00:21:17,560 --> 00:21:19,650 It gives you a higher modulus. 529 00:21:19,650 --> 00:21:22,780 And then this is a chemical crosslinking technique that 530 00:21:22,780 --> 00:21:24,560 increases the modulus again. 531 00:21:24,560 --> 00:21:27,090 So if you put all of this together, 532 00:21:27,090 --> 00:21:30,930 you can show these results for the modulus on one table. 533 00:21:30,930 --> 00:21:32,597 So these are all the wet modulus. 534 00:21:32,597 --> 00:21:34,180 So it's pretty clear by playing around 535 00:21:34,180 --> 00:21:36,950 with the relative density and the crosslinking, 536 00:21:36,950 --> 00:21:39,430 that you can get a scaffold in that range. 537 00:21:39,430 --> 00:21:42,580 And the idea is that that would help get the mesenchymal stem 538 00:21:42,580 --> 00:21:47,630 cells to differentiate into these osteoblast-like cells. 539 00:21:47,630 --> 00:21:49,510 So then we wanted to also see if our models 540 00:21:49,510 --> 00:21:54,030 for the cellular solids could be applied to this scaffold, 541 00:21:54,030 --> 00:21:56,500 and we needed the solid properties. 542 00:21:56,500 --> 00:21:59,910 So Kristyn Van Vliet helped us with this, 543 00:21:59,910 --> 00:22:04,932 and we isolated a single strut, bonded it to a glass slide, 544 00:22:04,932 --> 00:22:06,640 and, I think, I mentioned this last time, 545 00:22:06,640 --> 00:22:10,017 we used an AFM tip to then do a little bending test. 546 00:22:10,017 --> 00:22:11,850 So I think the one I mentioned last time was 547 00:22:11,850 --> 00:22:13,330 for the collagen-GAG scaffold. 548 00:22:13,330 --> 00:22:16,340 Then we also did the same thing for the mineralized scaffold. 549 00:22:16,340 --> 00:22:20,390 And here we measured a modulus of about seven gigapascals, 550 00:22:20,390 --> 00:22:22,010 so that's a dry modulus. 551 00:22:22,010 --> 00:22:23,650 And just for comparison, the modulus 552 00:22:23,650 --> 00:22:26,190 of the solid and trabecular bone is something around 18. 553 00:22:26,190 --> 00:22:29,000 So it's lower, but it's in the same ballpark. 554 00:22:29,000 --> 00:22:31,890 And by nanoindentation, we measured a strength 555 00:22:31,890 --> 00:22:34,800 of about 200, and that's similar to what you 556 00:22:34,800 --> 00:22:36,160 would get in trabecular bone. 557 00:22:36,160 --> 00:22:38,410 So the solid in the struts themselves 558 00:22:38,410 --> 00:22:42,230 is not exactly like trabecular bone in mechanical properties, 559 00:22:42,230 --> 00:22:44,550 but not too far off. 560 00:22:44,550 --> 00:22:48,520 And then here's a plot of the scaffold modulus divided 561 00:22:48,520 --> 00:22:51,940 by the solid modulus against the relative density. 562 00:22:51,940 --> 00:22:56,250 And this line here, the curve, is a squared relationship. 563 00:22:56,250 --> 00:22:59,540 So that's what we'd expect for the foam models. 564 00:22:59,540 --> 00:23:00,590 And this is the strength. 565 00:23:00,590 --> 00:23:04,730 These things fail by a plastic or a brittle failure, 566 00:23:04,730 --> 00:23:09,741 and this curve is a three halves power with relative density. 567 00:23:09,741 --> 00:23:12,240 And again, that's what you'd expect from the cellular solids 568 00:23:12,240 --> 00:23:12,740 model. 569 00:23:12,740 --> 00:23:14,530 So that gives you a reasonable description 570 00:23:14,530 --> 00:23:20,040 of the behavior of the mineralized scaffold. 571 00:23:20,040 --> 00:23:21,840 So again, these were the considerations 572 00:23:21,840 --> 00:23:23,740 in trying to make the osteochondral scaffold. 573 00:23:23,740 --> 00:23:25,080 So now we have a collagen scaffold 574 00:23:25,080 --> 00:23:26,065 and we have a mineralized scaffolding, 575 00:23:26,065 --> 00:23:28,470 and we want to put the two of them together. 576 00:23:28,470 --> 00:23:30,970 So we wanted to use the joint as a model, 577 00:23:30,970 --> 00:23:33,880 and we wanted to have some intermediate layer that 578 00:23:33,880 --> 00:23:36,770 had some gradation in the mineralization. 579 00:23:36,770 --> 00:23:38,840 So that was the next step. 580 00:23:38,840 --> 00:23:41,940 And the way we did that was we used 581 00:23:41,940 --> 00:23:45,900 what we fancily called liquid-phase co-synthesis. 582 00:23:45,900 --> 00:23:48,490 This just meant that we took the mineralized collagen-GAG 583 00:23:48,490 --> 00:23:50,770 slurry, we poured that into a mold, 584 00:23:50,770 --> 00:23:53,030 and then we poured the non-mineralized slurry 585 00:23:53,030 --> 00:23:54,306 into the same mold. 586 00:23:54,306 --> 00:23:56,680 And then we just allowed the two slurries to interdiffuse 587 00:23:56,680 --> 00:23:58,315 for some time period. 588 00:23:58,315 --> 00:23:59,940 And then we did the freeze drying step. 589 00:23:59,940 --> 00:24:02,450 So the idea was, that if you poured the one on top 590 00:24:02,450 --> 00:24:04,899 of the other, the mineralized one is denser 591 00:24:04,899 --> 00:24:06,690 and then you put the less dense one on top, 592 00:24:06,690 --> 00:24:08,481 but over some period of time, there will be 593 00:24:08,481 --> 00:24:10,410 some diffusion between the two. 594 00:24:10,410 --> 00:24:12,630 And then we just did the freeze drying step. 595 00:24:12,630 --> 00:24:14,390 So this is the scaffold we ended up with. 596 00:24:14,390 --> 00:24:16,810 This is a micro computer tomography image. 597 00:24:16,810 --> 00:24:19,490 So here's the collagen-GAG scaffold 598 00:24:19,490 --> 00:24:21,830 for the cartilage on top, and here's 599 00:24:21,830 --> 00:24:25,870 the mineralized collagen-GAG calcium phosphate scaffold 600 00:24:25,870 --> 00:24:28,060 on the bottom for the bone. 601 00:24:28,060 --> 00:24:31,920 And that just kind of shows what it looked like. 602 00:24:31,920 --> 00:24:33,860 The porosities and the pore sizes 603 00:24:33,860 --> 00:24:37,140 we got, the collagen-GAG was about 98% porous 604 00:24:37,140 --> 00:24:40,030 and had a pore size of around 650 microns. 605 00:24:40,030 --> 00:24:43,250 The mineralized scaffold was 95.5% porous 606 00:24:43,250 --> 00:24:48,192 and had a pore size of 400, roughly, microns. 607 00:24:48,192 --> 00:24:49,650 And then this is what the structure 608 00:24:49,650 --> 00:24:51,840 looked like in the EDX. 609 00:24:51,840 --> 00:24:54,050 You can see, this is the collagen-GAG layer, 610 00:24:54,050 --> 00:24:55,800 this is the mineralized layer, and there's 611 00:24:55,800 --> 00:24:58,770 some zone in between that's a little bit mineralized, not 612 00:24:58,770 --> 00:25:02,330 as much as the bony layer but more than the cartilage 613 00:25:02,330 --> 00:25:07,230 layer, and the same with the phosphorus. 614 00:25:07,230 --> 00:25:12,390 So we have this collagen-GAG slightly mineralized layer, 615 00:25:12,390 --> 00:25:15,550 and then a more mineralized layer 616 00:25:15,550 --> 00:25:18,520 And then finally, there was a student, Scott Vickers, 617 00:25:18,520 --> 00:25:20,680 who worked with Myron Spector at the Brigham. 618 00:25:20,680 --> 00:25:22,000 And oops, oops. 619 00:25:22,000 --> 00:25:25,460 No, I don't want the weekly updates, thank you. 620 00:25:25,460 --> 00:25:26,890 Sorry. 621 00:25:26,890 --> 00:25:30,390 Well, let me just get rid of this. 622 00:25:30,390 --> 00:25:33,680 Oop, where's my little mousy mouse? 623 00:25:33,680 --> 00:25:34,250 There we go. 624 00:25:34,250 --> 00:25:37,810 OK, so Scott Vickers worked with Myron Spector, 625 00:25:37,810 --> 00:25:41,360 and Myron had a surgeon who could do animal studies. 626 00:25:41,360 --> 00:25:43,310 So we did some animal studies on goats. 627 00:25:43,310 --> 00:25:46,070 I think there were six goats at the Brigham. 628 00:25:46,070 --> 00:25:49,040 And they took a plug out of the knee of the goats, 629 00:25:49,040 --> 00:25:50,710 and they put our scaffold in. 630 00:25:50,710 --> 00:25:52,750 So this is one of the surgeries as they're 631 00:25:52,750 --> 00:25:54,980 about to poke the scaffold in. 632 00:25:54,980 --> 00:25:58,260 And then, Scott waited, I think it was four months, 633 00:25:58,260 --> 00:26:01,680 and then sacrificed the goats, and then did the histology. 634 00:26:01,680 --> 00:26:04,460 And this is one of the images from his PhD. 635 00:26:04,460 --> 00:26:08,110 So this staining shows that you've got tissue growing in. 636 00:26:08,110 --> 00:26:11,840 The scaffold was where these little black dotted lines are. 637 00:26:11,840 --> 00:26:14,420 So you had bony tissue in here, and there 638 00:26:14,420 --> 00:26:17,840 was a cartilage-like tissue formed at the top. 639 00:26:17,840 --> 00:26:19,940 It wasn't perfect articular cartilage, 640 00:26:19,940 --> 00:26:23,240 but it was something similar to that. 641 00:26:23,240 --> 00:26:26,680 And really was as far as we took the project with the funding 642 00:26:26,680 --> 00:26:27,290 that we had. 643 00:26:27,290 --> 00:26:29,180 We had a-- I don't know if you remember that-- well, it's 644 00:26:29,180 --> 00:26:30,190 beyond before your time. 645 00:26:30,190 --> 00:26:33,310 But Cambridge and MIT had a big research collaboration 646 00:26:33,310 --> 00:26:37,120 and the student exchange was part of that. 647 00:26:37,120 --> 00:26:39,560 And this was done through that research collaboration 648 00:26:39,560 --> 00:26:41,890 between Cambridge and MIT. 649 00:26:41,890 --> 00:26:45,650 So this was as far as we took it with that research funding. 650 00:26:45,650 --> 00:26:48,000 Andrew Lynn, who was the student in Cambridge, 651 00:26:48,000 --> 00:26:49,990 who developed the mineralized scaffold, 652 00:26:49,990 --> 00:26:52,940 he then started up a company called Orthomimetics, 653 00:26:52,940 --> 00:26:56,040 and he had longer term animal studies done, 654 00:26:56,040 --> 00:26:57,730 and he took it a little further. 655 00:26:57,730 --> 00:27:00,860 In Europe, there's something called CE Mark approval, 656 00:27:00,860 --> 00:27:02,610 and CE Mark approval means you can 657 00:27:02,610 --> 00:27:05,300 start doing clinical trials. 658 00:27:05,300 --> 00:27:07,060 So he never got FDA approval for it, 659 00:27:07,060 --> 00:27:10,250 but he got approval to have clinical trials in Europe. 660 00:27:10,250 --> 00:27:14,450 And the first clinical use was in February of 2009. 661 00:27:14,450 --> 00:27:17,470 And they started off using it for the donor 662 00:27:17,470 --> 00:27:19,260 sites for the mosaicplasties. 663 00:27:19,260 --> 00:27:21,060 Remember the second method I talked about? 664 00:27:21,060 --> 00:27:23,210 They take plugs out of one region 665 00:27:23,210 --> 00:27:25,750 and put them into the region with the damage. 666 00:27:25,750 --> 00:27:27,730 So what they were doing was using our scaffold 667 00:27:27,730 --> 00:27:30,327 to fill up these donor sites here 668 00:27:30,327 --> 00:27:31,910 and they found that worked quite well. 669 00:27:31,910 --> 00:27:33,660 And then eventually, they started using it 670 00:27:33,660 --> 00:27:35,530 for the primary sites as well. 671 00:27:35,530 --> 00:27:40,190 And as of about April a few years ago, April 2012, 672 00:27:40,190 --> 00:27:43,250 they had treated about 200 people with this. 673 00:27:43,250 --> 00:27:45,913 AUDIENCE: Wait, so why not just directly start putting it 674 00:27:45,913 --> 00:27:47,769 in the-- why start with the-- 675 00:27:47,769 --> 00:27:49,810 LORNA GIBSON: I think because these were supposed 676 00:27:49,810 --> 00:27:53,270 to be sites that were less loaded, weren't as highly 677 00:27:53,270 --> 00:27:56,740 stressed, and they thought that was a more, not as critical 678 00:27:56,740 --> 00:27:57,826 a place to put them in. 679 00:27:57,826 --> 00:27:58,325 Yeah? 680 00:28:02,350 --> 00:28:05,510 AUDIENCE: So what is different about this scaffold? 681 00:28:05,510 --> 00:28:07,250 Is it the lack of the dense bone that 682 00:28:07,250 --> 00:28:12,734 allows all of the marrow cells to migrate up to the cartilage? 683 00:28:12,734 --> 00:28:14,400 LORNA GIBSON: Well, I think, there's not 684 00:28:14,400 --> 00:28:16,733 that many people that have made osteochondral scaffolds, 685 00:28:16,733 --> 00:28:19,670 so it's good that we've got these two layers. 686 00:28:19,670 --> 00:28:23,040 And the idea that you try to get the stem cells up 687 00:28:23,040 --> 00:28:24,520 into the cartilage. 688 00:28:24,520 --> 00:28:26,310 The stem cells will differentiate 689 00:28:26,310 --> 00:28:27,720 into the bone or the cartilage, I 690 00:28:27,720 --> 00:28:30,178 think, partly depending on the stiffness of the surrounding 691 00:28:30,178 --> 00:28:30,828 tissue. 692 00:28:30,828 --> 00:28:33,352 AUDIENCE: But they don't do that in normal bone because 693 00:28:33,352 --> 00:28:34,590 of the dense layer? 694 00:28:34,590 --> 00:28:36,726 LORNA GIBSON: No, I think they would. 695 00:28:36,726 --> 00:28:38,350 But the thing is, I mean, in some ways, 696 00:28:38,350 --> 00:28:40,620 that very first technique where you just 697 00:28:40,620 --> 00:28:43,440 drill holes in, I mean, in some ways, that's what it's counting 698 00:28:43,440 --> 00:28:46,342 on, right, is that the marrow mesenchymal stem 699 00:28:46,342 --> 00:28:48,550 cells are going to differentiate either into the bone 700 00:28:48,550 --> 00:28:49,830 or into the cartilage. 701 00:28:49,830 --> 00:28:53,010 But it's just got a hole to differentiate into. 702 00:28:53,010 --> 00:28:55,190 So this gives the cell something to attach 703 00:28:55,190 --> 00:28:58,580 to and I think, gives a better result. Yeah? 704 00:28:58,580 --> 00:29:01,340 AUDIENCE: So is part of the scaffold and this bone, 705 00:29:01,340 --> 00:29:03,640 are they removing the original bone? 706 00:29:03,640 --> 00:29:05,630 LORNA GIBSON: Yeah, they remove-- yeah. 707 00:29:05,630 --> 00:29:06,600 Let me back up a step. 708 00:29:06,600 --> 00:29:08,850 So when they do this thing here, so this is in a goat, 709 00:29:08,850 --> 00:29:10,724 but they would do the same thing in a person. 710 00:29:10,724 --> 00:29:13,050 So when they drill the hole to put that in, they 711 00:29:13,050 --> 00:29:15,620 go through the cartilage, they go through the compact bone, 712 00:29:15,620 --> 00:29:18,010 the dense bone, and they go into the trabecular bone, 713 00:29:18,010 --> 00:29:19,843 because you don't really get into the marrow 714 00:29:19,843 --> 00:29:23,030 until you're in the pores of the trabecular bone. 715 00:29:23,030 --> 00:29:23,660 OK? 716 00:29:23,660 --> 00:29:24,890 Are we good? 717 00:29:24,890 --> 00:29:26,361 AUDIENCE: How do they attach it? 718 00:29:26,361 --> 00:29:27,860 LORNA GIBSON: How do they attach it? 719 00:29:27,860 --> 00:29:28,270 AUDIENCE: Yes. 720 00:29:28,270 --> 00:29:30,103 LORNA GIBSON: I think it's just a press fit. 721 00:29:30,103 --> 00:29:32,590 I think they just drill a hole and stick it in. 722 00:29:32,590 --> 00:29:34,340 And these are all in joints, right? 723 00:29:34,340 --> 00:29:36,710 So there's always another bone pressing against it. 724 00:29:36,710 --> 00:29:39,530 I mean, in the surgery, they kind of peel things 725 00:29:39,530 --> 00:29:42,380 apart so they can do the surgery but there's another bone 726 00:29:42,380 --> 00:29:43,320 pressing down on it. 727 00:29:43,320 --> 00:29:46,930 So I don't think there was any glue or anything. 728 00:29:46,930 --> 00:29:48,480 So there's that. 729 00:29:48,480 --> 00:29:50,320 So this is just a summary. 730 00:29:50,320 --> 00:29:52,580 So we were able to make this two-layer scaffold 731 00:29:52,580 --> 00:29:54,691 with a gradient interface, and we 732 00:29:54,691 --> 00:29:56,190 tried to make it so that it mimicked 733 00:29:56,190 --> 00:29:58,130 the osteochondral tissues. 734 00:29:58,130 --> 00:30:00,040 And this freeze drawing process allowed 735 00:30:00,040 --> 00:30:02,270 us to control things like the mineral content, 736 00:30:02,270 --> 00:30:04,161 the porosity, the pore sizes. 737 00:30:04,161 --> 00:30:06,160 And then we used materials that had already been 738 00:30:06,160 --> 00:30:08,470 approved for medical devices. 739 00:30:08,470 --> 00:30:11,002 And this was funded by a number of places. 740 00:30:11,002 --> 00:30:13,210 So the Cambridge MIT Institute was that collaboration 741 00:30:13,210 --> 00:30:13,710 I mentioned. 742 00:30:13,710 --> 00:30:15,632 I have a chair and I used some money for that. 743 00:30:15,632 --> 00:30:17,590 Brendan Harley was one of the students involved 744 00:30:17,590 --> 00:30:19,550 and he got a fellowship from MIT. 745 00:30:19,550 --> 00:30:23,470 And Andrew Lynn got a fellowship through the Cambridge 746 00:30:23,470 --> 00:30:26,580 Commonwealth Trust and through St. John's College 747 00:30:26,580 --> 00:30:28,220 in Cambridge, that's his college there. 748 00:30:28,220 --> 00:30:30,420 So he had had funding through that. 749 00:30:30,420 --> 00:30:32,300 So I think that's the end of that talk. 750 00:30:32,300 --> 00:30:34,700 So are we good with scaffolds? 751 00:30:34,700 --> 00:30:36,909 Yeah, you're good? 752 00:30:36,909 --> 00:30:38,575 So obviously, this probably whole course 753 00:30:38,575 --> 00:30:40,120 is on tissue engineering. 754 00:30:40,120 --> 00:30:41,670 This is just scratching the surface 755 00:30:41,670 --> 00:30:43,392 and giving you an introduction to it, 756 00:30:43,392 --> 00:30:45,600 but I wanted to show you how a lot of these scaffolds 757 00:30:45,600 --> 00:30:48,600 look a lot like the foamy materials that I work on, 758 00:30:48,600 --> 00:30:51,930 and that you can use the same models for trying 759 00:30:51,930 --> 00:30:54,470 to understand the mechanical properties of the scaffold. 760 00:30:54,470 --> 00:30:57,690 And even though the scaffolds are acting in a biological way, 761 00:30:57,690 --> 00:31:00,270 there's actually a connection between the mechanical behavior 762 00:31:00,270 --> 00:31:03,410 of the scaffolds and the biological response. 763 00:31:03,410 --> 00:31:09,320 So I'm going to talk on Monday about cell/scaffold 764 00:31:09,320 --> 00:31:13,930 interactions, so how the environment 765 00:31:13,930 --> 00:31:17,140 biological cells are in can affect how they behave. 766 00:31:17,140 --> 00:31:19,390 So we're going to talk about things like cell adhesion 767 00:31:19,390 --> 00:31:22,260 and cell migration and cell contraction, 768 00:31:22,260 --> 00:31:23,690 contractile behavior. 769 00:31:23,690 --> 00:31:26,302 So I've got another talk a little bit like this 770 00:31:26,302 --> 00:31:28,010 and that means I'll have a few notes I'll 771 00:31:28,010 --> 00:31:30,090 put on the board on Monday about how 772 00:31:30,090 --> 00:31:33,460 the environment that the cells are in affects how they behave, 773 00:31:33,460 --> 00:31:34,080 OK? 774 00:31:34,080 --> 00:31:36,530 So this is leading up to that. 775 00:31:36,530 --> 00:31:38,269 It's sort of a similar thing. 776 00:31:38,269 --> 00:31:39,810 So I thought for the rest of the time 777 00:31:39,810 --> 00:31:43,130 today, because I knew this was going to end early, 778 00:31:43,130 --> 00:31:46,840 I thought what I would do is just switch gears 779 00:31:46,840 --> 00:31:49,020 and talk about writing. 780 00:31:49,020 --> 00:31:50,956 So normally when I give a class, I 781 00:31:50,956 --> 00:31:52,580 don't talk about writing all that much. 782 00:31:52,580 --> 00:31:54,940 I talk about the technical stuff. 783 00:31:54,940 --> 00:31:58,230 But it turns out writing is actually a huge part of what 784 00:31:58,230 --> 00:32:02,250 scientists do and engineers do and whether or not you end up 785 00:32:02,250 --> 00:32:04,475 with an academic job or a job in industry 786 00:32:04,475 --> 00:32:06,600 or working for government, no matter where you are, 787 00:32:06,600 --> 00:32:08,300 you are going to have to write things. 788 00:32:08,300 --> 00:32:10,800 And the better you write, the better off you're going to be. 789 00:32:10,800 --> 00:32:14,720 So I made copies of this brochure 790 00:32:14,720 --> 00:32:16,809 and I have a few little slides. 791 00:32:16,809 --> 00:32:18,850 And you're going to have to write up your project 792 00:32:18,850 --> 00:32:25,240 report for me, and I thought it might be helpful to just go 793 00:32:25,240 --> 00:32:26,936 through this little brochure. 794 00:32:26,936 --> 00:32:28,810 So I'm not going to write stuff on the board. 795 00:32:28,810 --> 00:32:31,040 Everything is pretty much in this brochure, 796 00:32:31,040 --> 00:32:32,930 but I thought I'd just walk you through some 797 00:32:32,930 --> 00:32:33,930 of the main parts of it. 798 00:32:33,930 --> 00:32:34,780 Oh, did you get one? 799 00:32:34,780 --> 00:32:35,830 Here, have one. 800 00:32:39,970 --> 00:32:42,470 So you might want to think about this when you're writing up 801 00:32:42,470 --> 00:32:45,180 your project report for this class, 802 00:32:45,180 --> 00:32:46,860 but this really is, it's general. 803 00:32:46,860 --> 00:32:49,068 It's really for any time you have to write something. 804 00:32:49,068 --> 00:32:50,870 This is helpful. 805 00:32:50,870 --> 00:32:52,576 So Mike Ashby put this together. 806 00:32:52,576 --> 00:32:54,950 And as I mentioned, he's done a lot of scientific writing 807 00:32:54,950 --> 00:32:57,830 and especially in material science and engineering. 808 00:32:57,830 --> 00:32:59,267 He also makes paintings. 809 00:32:59,267 --> 00:33:00,850 This is one of Mike's little paintings 810 00:33:00,850 --> 00:33:02,950 of him writing a paper. 811 00:33:02,950 --> 00:33:07,920 And what I was going to do is just walk through it. 812 00:33:07,920 --> 00:33:11,010 So there's just a few figures, and mostly it's text, 813 00:33:11,010 --> 00:33:12,960 but let me go through some of the figures. 814 00:33:12,960 --> 00:33:18,110 So I'm going to just turn to what's page three, OK? 815 00:33:18,110 --> 00:33:20,890 So one of the things that he says to start, 816 00:33:20,890 --> 00:33:22,870 and I think this makes a lot of sense, 817 00:33:22,870 --> 00:33:26,236 is that you can think of writing a paper the same way you 818 00:33:26,236 --> 00:33:28,360 can think about designing something in engineering. 819 00:33:28,360 --> 00:33:30,290 So when you think about design, there's 820 00:33:30,290 --> 00:33:31,750 different stages of design, right? 821 00:33:31,750 --> 00:33:36,282 There's a conceptual design, where you just decide roughly 822 00:33:36,282 --> 00:33:37,490 what the thing's going to be. 823 00:33:37,490 --> 00:33:39,480 There's embodiment, where you work out 824 00:33:39,480 --> 00:33:43,310 a lot of the more details. 825 00:33:43,310 --> 00:33:46,380 You design one version of it. 826 00:33:46,380 --> 00:33:48,340 And then there's the detailed design, where 827 00:33:48,340 --> 00:33:50,770 you do all the fine-tuning. 828 00:33:50,770 --> 00:33:53,310 You do all the final design things. 829 00:33:53,310 --> 00:33:55,030 And before you really start your design, 830 00:33:55,030 --> 00:33:57,071 if you were going to design an engineering thing, 831 00:33:57,071 --> 00:33:59,540 you would first of all think about what's the market. 832 00:33:59,540 --> 00:34:02,349 And if you're writing, the market is your readers. 833 00:34:02,349 --> 00:34:04,640 And so when you think about what you're going to write, 834 00:34:04,640 --> 00:34:06,598 you have to think about who's going to read it. 835 00:34:06,598 --> 00:34:08,820 And it's the same thing when I give a talk. 836 00:34:08,820 --> 00:34:12,560 When I give a talk, before I make a single PowerPoint slide, 837 00:34:12,560 --> 00:34:14,940 the first thing I think about is who am I talking to 838 00:34:14,940 --> 00:34:16,690 and what do they already know? 839 00:34:16,690 --> 00:34:18,530 What's the audience? 840 00:34:18,530 --> 00:34:20,760 What are they looking to get out of the talk? 841 00:34:20,760 --> 00:34:23,174 What am I trying to convey in the talk? 842 00:34:23,174 --> 00:34:24,590 And the writing is the same thing. 843 00:34:24,590 --> 00:34:26,469 You have to think about your audience. 844 00:34:26,469 --> 00:34:30,590 So for instance, I have technical talks. 845 00:34:30,590 --> 00:34:33,440 Obviously, I go give technical talks at meetings, 846 00:34:33,440 --> 00:34:35,010 but I do other sorts of talks too. 847 00:34:35,010 --> 00:34:36,218 I've got the woodpecker talk. 848 00:34:36,218 --> 00:34:38,760 I go give the woodpecker talk at the Mass Audubon. 849 00:34:38,760 --> 00:34:40,989 And people come to listen to that talk who 850 00:34:40,989 --> 00:34:43,290 are interested in birds but they're not engineers. 851 00:34:43,290 --> 00:34:45,040 So when I do that talk, I have to make it 852 00:34:45,040 --> 00:34:48,120 so somebody could understand it who's intelligent 853 00:34:48,120 --> 00:34:49,889 but they're not necessarily an engineer. 854 00:34:49,889 --> 00:34:51,530 So I give a different kind of talk 855 00:34:51,530 --> 00:34:54,590 when I do that than when I give an engineering talk. 856 00:34:54,590 --> 00:34:57,440 And I got invited to a student dinner. 857 00:34:57,440 --> 00:35:00,960 I'm going out to somewhere with some students on Friday. 858 00:35:00,960 --> 00:35:03,260 I'm going to give that how I became a professor talk, 859 00:35:03,260 --> 00:35:06,020 and when I do the how I became a professor talk, 860 00:35:06,020 --> 00:35:10,290 it's more general, and so it's a different audience that I'm 861 00:35:10,290 --> 00:35:11,650 thinking about. 862 00:35:11,650 --> 00:35:14,152 And in some ways, when I do these talks, 863 00:35:14,152 --> 00:35:15,610 it can be the same group of people, 864 00:35:15,610 --> 00:35:17,600 but depending on what I'm talking about, 865 00:35:17,600 --> 00:35:20,250 the way they look at it is different, OK? 866 00:35:20,250 --> 00:35:22,600 So the market thing is something to think about. 867 00:35:22,600 --> 00:35:25,530 So if you're writing a thesis, your market 868 00:35:25,530 --> 00:35:28,560 is your PhD committee, who's going to read the thesis 869 00:35:28,560 --> 00:35:30,020 and examine you on the thesis. 870 00:35:30,020 --> 00:35:31,827 If you're writing a paper, you've 871 00:35:31,827 --> 00:35:33,410 got to think about the market as being 872 00:35:33,410 --> 00:35:35,537 other people in your research field, some of who 873 00:35:35,537 --> 00:35:37,620 are going to be the reviewers, who are going to be 874 00:35:37,620 --> 00:35:39,890 reading it and criticizing it. 875 00:35:39,890 --> 00:35:44,020 If you're writing a general popular science book, 876 00:35:44,020 --> 00:35:45,440 it's a different kind of audience. 877 00:35:45,440 --> 00:35:49,600 If you're writing a research proposal, 878 00:35:49,600 --> 00:35:51,964 the audience is going to be the funding agency. 879 00:35:51,964 --> 00:35:54,380 Are they interested in what you're talking about, but also 880 00:35:54,380 --> 00:35:56,700 reviewers, who are going to be deciding 881 00:35:56,700 --> 00:35:58,800 whether or not to give you the money 882 00:35:58,800 --> 00:36:00,836 and what the criticisms are. 883 00:36:00,836 --> 00:36:02,710 So you have to think about who the market is. 884 00:36:02,710 --> 00:36:04,670 So that's one thing. 885 00:36:04,670 --> 00:36:08,164 And one thing that think about in doing the writing-- you 886 00:36:08,164 --> 00:36:10,330 know Mike and I have written several books together, 887 00:36:10,330 --> 00:36:12,329 and when I tell my neighbors I've written books, 888 00:36:12,329 --> 00:36:14,350 they somehow think-- their first idea is 889 00:36:14,350 --> 00:36:16,265 that we start on page one and we start 890 00:36:16,265 --> 00:36:17,890 writing the book from page one and then 891 00:36:17,890 --> 00:36:20,176 we work our way through to page 500. 892 00:36:20,176 --> 00:36:22,140 And that's not how we do it at all 893 00:36:22,140 --> 00:36:24,134 and that's not how I write papers. 894 00:36:24,134 --> 00:36:25,800 That's not how most people write papers. 895 00:36:25,800 --> 00:36:29,060 You've got to think about the big picture 896 00:36:29,060 --> 00:36:32,080 and think about, roughly, what goes where. 897 00:36:32,080 --> 00:36:33,890 And then maybe think about a draft 898 00:36:33,890 --> 00:36:37,190 that gets the scientific facts right. 899 00:36:37,190 --> 00:36:40,690 You put the information down, and then you 900 00:36:40,690 --> 00:36:44,180 try to figure out about how do you make the style really nice? 901 00:36:44,180 --> 00:36:45,230 How to make it read well? 902 00:36:45,230 --> 00:36:47,444 How do you make it easy to understand? 903 00:36:47,444 --> 00:36:49,610 How does one paragraph lead into the next paragraph? 904 00:36:49,610 --> 00:36:51,070 So it's an iterative thing. 905 00:36:51,070 --> 00:36:53,660 It's not like you start at page one or line one 906 00:36:53,660 --> 00:36:55,210 and you just start writing. 907 00:36:55,210 --> 00:36:58,710 So it's an iterative process, the same as engineering design 908 00:36:58,710 --> 00:37:00,150 is an iterative process. 909 00:37:00,150 --> 00:37:04,340 If you were going to design, I don't know, 910 00:37:04,340 --> 00:37:06,960 a skateboard or something, you wouldn't just 911 00:37:06,960 --> 00:37:09,290 think you were going to make one and that would be it. 912 00:37:09,290 --> 00:37:12,920 That's how writing is, and often, students don't see it 913 00:37:12,920 --> 00:37:15,020 as this iterative thing. 914 00:37:15,020 --> 00:37:17,970 OK, so that's that page there. 915 00:37:17,970 --> 00:37:19,700 Let's see, I already talked about market. 916 00:37:19,700 --> 00:37:22,590 I think I have another little slide about-- here's 917 00:37:22,590 --> 00:37:24,880 another slide here about markets. 918 00:37:24,880 --> 00:37:26,390 So this is what I just said. 919 00:37:26,390 --> 00:37:27,280 Who are the readers? 920 00:37:27,280 --> 00:37:28,535 How are they going to use it? 921 00:37:28,535 --> 00:37:30,660 So you've got to think about who you're writing for 922 00:37:30,660 --> 00:37:36,240 or if you're giving a talk, who's going to look at that. 923 00:37:36,240 --> 00:37:39,570 OK, now the next phase is to make what 924 00:37:39,570 --> 00:37:42,370 Mike calls a concept sheet. 925 00:37:42,370 --> 00:37:45,230 I would just think of this as an outline. 926 00:37:45,230 --> 00:37:47,620 And I always make some sort of outline 927 00:37:47,620 --> 00:37:49,430 before I try to write anything. 928 00:37:49,430 --> 00:37:52,410 And there's different ways you can do that. 929 00:37:52,410 --> 00:37:54,160 The thing that Mike's got here and there's 930 00:37:54,160 --> 00:37:56,570 a nice little figure on page six, which 931 00:37:56,570 --> 00:38:00,260 is what I've got up here, is he takes a big piece of paper. 932 00:38:00,260 --> 00:38:02,930 In Europe, it would be known as the A3. 933 00:38:02,930 --> 00:38:05,960 Here it would be known as the eight and a half by 17. 934 00:38:05,960 --> 00:38:08,450 You take a big piece of paper. 935 00:38:08,450 --> 00:38:10,390 This stationery company actually makes paper 936 00:38:10,390 --> 00:38:12,814 with big blank space in the middle and little note 937 00:38:12,814 --> 00:38:15,230 space on the outside or you could just use the back of it. 938 00:38:15,230 --> 00:38:17,150 So you take a big piece of paper and you 939 00:38:17,150 --> 00:38:19,780 may think this is douffy, but it actually helps. 940 00:38:19,780 --> 00:38:21,370 So you take your big piece of paper, 941 00:38:21,370 --> 00:38:23,739 and you just make boxes about each topic. 942 00:38:23,739 --> 00:38:25,280 You're going to have an introduction, 943 00:38:25,280 --> 00:38:27,071 you're going to have methods and materials, 944 00:38:27,071 --> 00:38:28,730 you're going to have a result section. 945 00:38:28,730 --> 00:38:32,680 And you think about what should go into each of those boxes. 946 00:38:32,680 --> 00:38:34,350 And what you're trying to do here 947 00:38:34,350 --> 00:38:36,812 is think about the whole paper and how it all fits together 948 00:38:36,812 --> 00:38:39,020 and what goes where and what are you going to include 949 00:38:39,020 --> 00:38:40,890 and what are you not going to include. 950 00:38:40,890 --> 00:38:43,380 So people think about writing as sitting at the keyboard 951 00:38:43,380 --> 00:38:47,035 and typing, but that's just the-- 952 00:38:47,035 --> 00:38:48,660 how when you get a problem on a problem 953 00:38:48,660 --> 00:38:51,610 set, you turn and crank, that's the turning and cranking part. 954 00:38:51,610 --> 00:38:55,900 The thoughtful part is figuring out what to put in, 955 00:38:55,900 --> 00:38:58,040 what to leave out, what figures you want, 956 00:38:58,040 --> 00:38:59,490 how you organize the whole thing, 957 00:38:59,490 --> 00:39:02,410 how you put it all together, and this helps you do that. 958 00:39:02,410 --> 00:39:06,130 And you can make this-- it's just for you. 959 00:39:06,130 --> 00:39:07,950 It doesn't have to look great. 960 00:39:07,950 --> 00:39:09,450 You can make this messy if you want. 961 00:39:09,450 --> 00:39:10,520 It doesn't really matter. 962 00:39:10,520 --> 00:39:14,079 But it's good to have some sort of an overview of how you want 963 00:39:14,079 --> 00:39:15,620 to put the thing together, and that's 964 00:39:15,620 --> 00:39:18,670 what this stage helps you do. 965 00:39:18,670 --> 00:39:21,630 So Mike's put other little things here. 966 00:39:21,630 --> 00:39:24,910 So see papers by so-and-so and so-and-so. 967 00:39:24,910 --> 00:39:26,216 So you've got an introduction. 968 00:39:26,216 --> 00:39:27,590 You want to talk about something. 969 00:39:27,590 --> 00:39:29,780 You know there should be some references go here. 970 00:39:29,780 --> 00:39:31,655 Maybe you think there's some extra references 971 00:39:31,655 --> 00:39:33,237 you haven't got. 972 00:39:33,237 --> 00:39:34,820 Maybe something in the method, there's 973 00:39:34,820 --> 00:39:36,686 some analogy you can use here. 974 00:39:36,686 --> 00:39:38,560 Maybe you need a figure, needs a good figure. 975 00:39:38,560 --> 00:39:40,270 You don't have to actually have the figure. 976 00:39:40,270 --> 00:39:42,728 You just say I need a figure and you have a vague idea what 977 00:39:42,728 --> 00:39:44,500 the figure looks like. 978 00:39:44,500 --> 00:39:46,490 Here there's some discussion point. 979 00:39:46,490 --> 00:39:50,230 Discuss this with collaborators, Ed, all this stuff. 980 00:39:50,230 --> 00:39:53,890 So you just put down roughly what needs to go where 981 00:39:53,890 --> 00:39:55,420 and you think about the whole thing 982 00:39:55,420 --> 00:39:57,500 and how it's all going to fit together. 983 00:39:57,500 --> 00:40:01,870 And then as you work through it, it looks more like this. 984 00:40:01,870 --> 00:40:03,255 So this would be on page seven. 985 00:40:06,220 --> 00:40:09,940 And this is filled in, and if fact, 986 00:40:09,940 --> 00:40:12,730 this particular one, what he's written down here 987 00:40:12,730 --> 00:40:17,550 is the overview he made for making this booklet, OK? 988 00:40:17,550 --> 00:40:19,700 So the things refer to this book. 989 00:40:19,700 --> 00:40:21,454 So here's the introduction. 990 00:40:21,454 --> 00:40:23,620 Here's the little chart we went through and through, 991 00:40:23,620 --> 00:40:26,470 the concept design, embodiment, and detail, blah, blah, blah. 992 00:40:26,470 --> 00:40:27,900 Here's the need, the market need. 993 00:40:27,900 --> 00:40:29,407 We just talked about that. 994 00:40:29,407 --> 00:40:31,990 Here's the concept thing that we we're just talking about now. 995 00:40:31,990 --> 00:40:35,240 Then we're going to talk about each of these different phases. 996 00:40:35,240 --> 00:40:39,550 And his initials are MFA, Michael F. Ashby. 997 00:40:39,550 --> 00:40:41,580 Think out, that means think about this more. 998 00:40:41,580 --> 00:40:43,040 I haven't figured this out yet. 999 00:40:43,040 --> 00:40:46,680 I need an example here, all these kinds of things. 1000 00:40:46,680 --> 00:40:48,330 So this is the way he does it. 1001 00:40:48,330 --> 00:40:50,230 There's a couple of other ways you can do it. 1002 00:40:50,230 --> 00:40:53,200 One way is to just make a bullet outline, that's 1003 00:40:53,200 --> 00:40:54,294 typically what I do. 1004 00:40:54,294 --> 00:40:56,210 You know you're going to have an introduction, 1005 00:40:56,210 --> 00:40:57,480 these different headings. 1006 00:40:57,480 --> 00:40:59,460 And you might put in the bullet outline 1007 00:40:59,460 --> 00:41:02,180 these same sorts of things, like I need this figure 1008 00:41:02,180 --> 00:41:04,560 or we need to get one more set of data 1009 00:41:04,560 --> 00:41:06,800 or I need to look up this reference. 1010 00:41:06,800 --> 00:41:08,990 So it doesn't have to be finished, 1011 00:41:08,990 --> 00:41:11,510 but it's a thing that tells you what have you got, 1012 00:41:11,510 --> 00:41:14,540 what do you need to do to make it all come together. 1013 00:41:14,540 --> 00:41:16,570 So that's one way to do it. 1014 00:41:16,570 --> 00:41:18,680 Another way to do it is by thinking about what 1015 00:41:18,680 --> 00:41:20,540 figures you want in the paper. 1016 00:41:20,540 --> 00:41:23,860 So some people, before they write any words, 1017 00:41:23,860 --> 00:41:26,520 they say, well, I know I want to have these figures, 1018 00:41:26,520 --> 00:41:29,060 and then they build the words around the figures. 1019 00:41:29,060 --> 00:41:32,560 And they can even sketch out what the figures are. 1020 00:41:32,560 --> 00:41:34,769 Some people even start before they start the project, 1021 00:41:34,769 --> 00:41:36,185 they say what kind of figures do I 1022 00:41:36,185 --> 00:41:37,480 want at the end of the project? 1023 00:41:37,480 --> 00:41:39,390 And they don't know if the data is going to do this or that. 1024 00:41:39,390 --> 00:41:40,970 They don't know which way the data is going to go, 1025 00:41:40,970 --> 00:41:42,920 but they say I want to have a plot of one 1026 00:41:42,920 --> 00:41:44,525 thing versus another thing. 1027 00:41:44,525 --> 00:41:47,619 Oh, you're looking like this is not OK? 1028 00:41:47,619 --> 00:41:48,160 AUDIENCE: No. 1029 00:41:48,160 --> 00:41:48,868 LORNA GIBSON: No? 1030 00:41:48,868 --> 00:41:51,550 OK, yeah, some people do this. 1031 00:41:51,550 --> 00:41:54,320 So even when you're ready to write, 1032 00:41:54,320 --> 00:41:57,130 you could say to yourself, well, in the methods, 1033 00:41:57,130 --> 00:42:00,380 do I need a figure that's a schematic of some apparatus? 1034 00:42:00,380 --> 00:42:03,530 In the results, how am I going to present the results 1035 00:42:03,530 --> 00:42:04,280 in the discussion? 1036 00:42:04,280 --> 00:42:05,920 Do we need some other kind of figure? 1037 00:42:05,920 --> 00:42:07,890 So if you have a set of figures, you 1038 00:42:07,890 --> 00:42:10,535 can work the text around those figures. 1039 00:42:10,535 --> 00:42:12,960 So that's another way to do this. 1040 00:42:12,960 --> 00:42:15,690 So those are just three options, but all of them 1041 00:42:15,690 --> 00:42:19,140 have in common that you think about the whole paper 1042 00:42:19,140 --> 00:42:20,690 and how it all fits together and what 1043 00:42:20,690 --> 00:42:22,520 goes where and what do you have already 1044 00:42:22,520 --> 00:42:25,400 and what else do you need to get, OK? 1045 00:42:25,400 --> 00:42:27,230 So that's that. 1046 00:42:27,230 --> 00:42:29,170 And then what I was going to do-- 1047 00:42:29,170 --> 00:42:31,815 I think that's probably the last figure that's-- yeah, OK. 1048 00:42:31,815 --> 00:42:33,440 So there's just this little thing here. 1049 00:42:33,440 --> 00:42:35,481 So what I was going to do is just talk about some 1050 00:42:35,481 --> 00:42:37,780 of the other things in this little booklet that 1051 00:42:37,780 --> 00:42:42,780 work through each of these stages of the writing. 1052 00:42:42,780 --> 00:42:45,437 So that's the concept, and then the next phase 1053 00:42:45,437 --> 00:42:47,020 would be what's called the embodiment, 1054 00:42:47,020 --> 00:42:49,350 if you think of the design language, 1055 00:42:49,350 --> 00:42:51,090 and that would be the first draft. 1056 00:42:51,090 --> 00:42:53,970 And I think most people find the most difficult thing is 1057 00:42:53,970 --> 00:42:55,120 to write the first draft. 1058 00:42:55,120 --> 00:42:56,460 I mean, I find that the hardest. 1059 00:42:56,460 --> 00:42:58,300 Once you've got something, editing it 1060 00:42:58,300 --> 00:43:00,270 is relatively straightforward. 1061 00:43:00,270 --> 00:43:02,230 You go, oh, this piece should go over there 1062 00:43:02,230 --> 00:43:04,240 or there's something missing. 1063 00:43:04,240 --> 00:43:07,350 But getting the first draft down is the hardest thing. 1064 00:43:07,350 --> 00:43:12,200 And one of the things-- it's like when 1065 00:43:12,200 --> 00:43:14,590 I talked about writing the book, you 1066 00:43:14,590 --> 00:43:16,730 don't write the draft sequentially either. 1067 00:43:16,730 --> 00:43:19,020 I typically tell students to start with the materials 1068 00:43:19,020 --> 00:43:21,145 and methods because that's the most straightforward 1069 00:43:21,145 --> 00:43:22,874 and it's the easiest to write. 1070 00:43:22,874 --> 00:43:25,290 There's not a whole lot of mystery to how you actually did 1071 00:43:25,290 --> 00:43:26,770 something you've already done. 1072 00:43:26,770 --> 00:43:29,310 So I tell people don't write the introduction first. 1073 00:43:29,310 --> 00:43:32,300 That's a bad idea because it's actually often not 1074 00:43:32,300 --> 00:43:33,930 so easy to write the introduction. 1075 00:43:33,930 --> 00:43:36,970 So I tell people to write the materials and methods first. 1076 00:43:36,970 --> 00:43:40,230 Write the result section because you've got your results 1077 00:43:40,230 --> 00:43:42,390 and you know what the results are going to be. 1078 00:43:42,390 --> 00:43:43,960 So those are the two easiest things. 1079 00:43:43,960 --> 00:43:46,570 And often, I think, what people find 1080 00:43:46,570 --> 00:43:49,755 is if they find it hard to write it's because they don't know 1081 00:43:49,755 --> 00:43:52,380 what they want to write or they haven't thought things through. 1082 00:43:52,380 --> 00:43:54,270 They haven't got their thoughts together. 1083 00:43:54,270 --> 00:43:56,350 And if you've got your thoughts, if you 1084 00:43:56,350 --> 00:44:01,490 know what you want to say, then the writing becomes easier. 1085 00:44:01,490 --> 00:44:03,740 So one of the pieces of advice Mike 1086 00:44:03,740 --> 00:44:06,890 gave me, and it's in this booklet too, 1087 00:44:06,890 --> 00:44:09,580 is in the first draft what you should try to do 1088 00:44:09,580 --> 00:44:11,240 is just get the facts down. 1089 00:44:11,240 --> 00:44:13,180 Just get the information down and don't 1090 00:44:13,180 --> 00:44:14,994 worry about if it doesn't sound quite right 1091 00:44:14,994 --> 00:44:17,160 or if this sentence doesn't lead into that sentence. 1092 00:44:17,160 --> 00:44:19,230 Don't worry about the style of it at all. 1093 00:44:19,230 --> 00:44:20,710 Just try to get the facts down. 1094 00:44:20,710 --> 00:44:22,430 Just try to get the information down. 1095 00:44:22,430 --> 00:44:24,290 And once you've got the information 1096 00:44:24,290 --> 00:44:27,120 and you've got some kind of framework-- I'm not 1097 00:44:27,120 --> 00:44:30,000 saying that you don't want to make the style good, 1098 00:44:30,000 --> 00:44:32,940 you do, but you don't need to do that the first thing. 1099 00:44:32,940 --> 00:44:35,190 The first thing is just to get the facts down, 1100 00:44:35,190 --> 00:44:38,080 and then you can edit it later on. 1101 00:44:38,080 --> 00:44:40,830 It's more of this iterative process. 1102 00:44:40,830 --> 00:44:43,000 OK, so the first draft, the most important thing 1103 00:44:43,000 --> 00:44:44,482 is just to get the facts down. 1104 00:44:44,482 --> 00:44:46,440 Then, I'm not going to read all of these things 1105 00:44:46,440 --> 00:44:49,400 because you can just read them yourself, 1106 00:44:49,400 --> 00:44:51,219 but I'll just comment on a few things. 1107 00:44:51,219 --> 00:44:53,135 So one thing he's got-- I'm on page eight now, 1108 00:44:53,135 --> 00:44:55,930 is the abstract. 1109 00:44:55,930 --> 00:44:57,790 So the abstract should be concise. 1110 00:44:57,790 --> 00:45:01,521 It should be fairly short and you 1111 00:45:01,521 --> 00:45:03,520 want to tell people why you're doing what you're 1112 00:45:03,520 --> 00:45:06,400 doing, what you did, what the key result is, 1113 00:45:06,400 --> 00:45:07,710 and what the conclusions are. 1114 00:45:07,710 --> 00:45:10,950 So it can be pretty short. 1115 00:45:10,950 --> 00:45:12,760 There's a section on the introduction. 1116 00:45:12,760 --> 00:45:14,316 You can just read that. 1117 00:45:14,316 --> 00:45:15,810 Let's see here. 1118 00:45:15,810 --> 00:45:18,450 Yeah, I think, you can read yourself these other things. 1119 00:45:18,450 --> 00:45:20,241 I don't want to go through the whole thing. 1120 00:45:22,860 --> 00:45:24,980 All right, so that's that. 1121 00:45:24,980 --> 00:45:28,610 OK, so you get to the end of the first draft, 1122 00:45:28,610 --> 00:45:30,710 there's a little section on figures here. 1123 00:45:30,710 --> 00:45:32,835 Let me just make some comments on that. 1124 00:45:35,570 --> 00:45:37,530 People who are busy and may not want 1125 00:45:37,530 --> 00:45:39,610 to read every word that you've written 1126 00:45:39,610 --> 00:45:42,160 will look at the figures, and they'll look at the figures 1127 00:45:42,160 --> 00:45:44,244 to make some judgment about does this look useful? 1128 00:45:44,244 --> 00:45:45,910 Does this look like you've got something 1129 00:45:45,910 --> 00:45:47,260 I want to spend more time on? 1130 00:45:47,260 --> 00:45:52,040 So it's important to make the figures easily understandable 1131 00:45:52,040 --> 00:45:55,130 and to be fairly self-contained. 1132 00:45:55,130 --> 00:45:57,989 So you want to make the figures clear. 1133 00:45:57,989 --> 00:46:00,030 You don't want to have too much information on it 1134 00:46:00,030 --> 00:46:02,211 so that people can't follow what's going on, 1135 00:46:02,211 --> 00:46:03,960 and you want them to illustrate the points 1136 00:46:03,960 --> 00:46:05,680 that you're trying to make. 1137 00:46:05,680 --> 00:46:08,120 So the figures are very important. 1138 00:46:08,120 --> 00:46:11,140 And then when you've got the first draft finished, 1139 00:46:11,140 --> 00:46:15,000 the next step, which I find tremendously useful 1140 00:46:15,000 --> 00:46:18,210 and students often don't get that this is a step. 1141 00:46:18,210 --> 00:46:19,760 The next step is you put it somewhere 1142 00:46:19,760 --> 00:46:22,099 and you don't do anything with it for a while. 1143 00:46:22,099 --> 00:46:24,140 And this is why it's important not to write it up 1144 00:46:24,140 --> 00:46:25,640 at the last second. 1145 00:46:25,640 --> 00:46:29,250 Because there's something about, you work on something, 1146 00:46:29,250 --> 00:46:31,300 you put it to one side, you don't do it. 1147 00:46:31,300 --> 00:46:33,285 You just leave it and you go do something else. 1148 00:46:33,285 --> 00:46:35,410 And then when you come back to it, all of a sudden, 1149 00:46:35,410 --> 00:46:38,830 you see things that you didn't see the first time through. 1150 00:46:38,830 --> 00:46:40,940 So the next step is you just put it to one side 1151 00:46:40,940 --> 00:46:42,100 for a couple days. 1152 00:46:42,100 --> 00:46:44,070 But you can only do that step for a class 1153 00:46:44,070 --> 00:46:47,534 if you started before the night before it's due, OK? 1154 00:46:47,534 --> 00:46:49,200 So that's why you have to start earlier. 1155 00:46:49,200 --> 00:46:52,530 That's why I'm telling you this now, OK? 1156 00:46:52,530 --> 00:46:54,960 So you put it aside and then you go have a cup of coffee. 1157 00:46:54,960 --> 00:46:56,543 You see there's several cups of coffee 1158 00:46:56,543 --> 00:46:59,180 that Mike has happily drawn for us here. 1159 00:46:59,180 --> 00:47:01,270 OK, then the next part of this is 1160 00:47:01,270 --> 00:47:03,300 all about grammar and sentence structure. 1161 00:47:03,300 --> 00:47:04,550 I'm not going to go over that. 1162 00:47:04,550 --> 00:47:05,999 You can read all that yourself. 1163 00:47:05,999 --> 00:47:08,040 But there is one amusing thing I want to tell you 1164 00:47:08,040 --> 00:47:09,690 because there's a cute story. 1165 00:47:09,690 --> 00:47:10,940 I'm on page 16 now. 1166 00:47:10,940 --> 00:47:12,750 There's a thing about spelling. 1167 00:47:12,750 --> 00:47:14,610 Mike is a terrible speller. 1168 00:47:14,610 --> 00:47:16,470 When I was his student, he used to-- there 1169 00:47:16,470 --> 00:47:18,030 were no word processors. 1170 00:47:18,030 --> 00:47:21,159 And we used to write things and he would write things 1171 00:47:21,159 --> 00:47:22,950 and I would say, I can't read your writing. 1172 00:47:22,950 --> 00:47:25,116 And he says, ah, well, I make up for my bad spelling 1173 00:47:25,116 --> 00:47:27,120 with my bad writing. 1174 00:47:27,120 --> 00:47:29,400 So I couldn't tell if he had spelled something right. 1175 00:47:29,400 --> 00:47:32,500 The other thing we found was that, we 1176 00:47:32,500 --> 00:47:34,600 wrote the cellular solid book, the first edition 1177 00:47:34,600 --> 00:47:36,700 was in the 1980s. 1178 00:47:36,700 --> 00:47:39,320 And I grew up in Canada, then I lived in England, 1179 00:47:39,320 --> 00:47:40,450 then I moved here. 1180 00:47:40,450 --> 00:47:43,610 He grew up in Australia, then he moved to England, 1181 00:47:43,610 --> 00:47:46,030 then he moved to the States then he moved back to England. 1182 00:47:46,030 --> 00:47:49,050 And words that end, that we spell I-Z-E, like 1183 00:47:49,050 --> 00:47:51,720 normalized, like normalized variables. 1184 00:47:51,720 --> 00:47:55,730 They're I-Z-E here. 1185 00:47:55,730 --> 00:47:58,050 In England, they're all I-S-E. 1186 00:47:58,050 --> 00:48:00,710 OK, and then some of the words, it turns out, 1187 00:48:00,710 --> 00:48:04,580 Canadians spell with an I-Z-E and some with I-S-E. 1188 00:48:04,580 --> 00:48:06,990 So anyway, we wrote the entire fricking book. 1189 00:48:06,990 --> 00:48:09,120 We were almost ready to send it off, 1190 00:48:09,120 --> 00:48:11,850 and we have all those graphs where the axes are normalized, 1191 00:48:11,850 --> 00:48:16,710 and we must have used the word normalized like 100 times, 1192 00:48:16,710 --> 00:48:19,140 and we realized half the time we had spelled it I-S-E 1193 00:48:19,140 --> 00:48:21,091 and half the time we had spelled it I-Z-E. 1194 00:48:21,091 --> 00:48:23,590 And then we had to go back and find them all and fix it all. 1195 00:48:23,590 --> 00:48:28,230 So anyway, that's just our little story about spelling. 1196 00:48:28,230 --> 00:48:29,890 OK, there's a thing about punctuation. 1197 00:48:29,890 --> 00:48:30,639 You can read that. 1198 00:48:30,639 --> 00:48:32,040 That's kind of boring. 1199 00:48:32,040 --> 00:48:34,350 I wanted to move on to the bit about style, 1200 00:48:34,350 --> 00:48:37,480 because style is important too. 1201 00:48:37,480 --> 00:48:41,060 And people remember papers that are well written. 1202 00:48:41,060 --> 00:48:45,450 Obviously, papers that have valuable scientific information 1203 00:48:45,450 --> 00:48:48,150 are memorable too, but if it's well-written, 1204 00:48:48,150 --> 00:48:52,020 it's more memorable, and the style really is important. 1205 00:48:52,020 --> 00:48:54,330 And it's the same with giving a talk. 1206 00:48:54,330 --> 00:48:56,670 You can convey the same information, 1207 00:48:56,670 --> 00:49:01,160 but if you don't have it presented in a clear way, 1208 00:49:01,160 --> 00:49:03,180 people aren't going to remember it. 1209 00:49:03,180 --> 00:49:04,960 So the first rule-- so I'm on page 20. 1210 00:49:04,960 --> 00:49:07,360 The first rule, now, is to be clear. 1211 00:49:07,360 --> 00:49:12,790 And being clear, it doesn't mean having long-winded sentences 1212 00:49:12,790 --> 00:49:14,050 with lots of jargon. 1213 00:49:14,050 --> 00:49:17,710 It really just means make it short, make it concise, 1214 00:49:17,710 --> 00:49:19,790 make it clear what you want to say. 1215 00:49:19,790 --> 00:49:21,360 So Mike has several examples here 1216 00:49:21,360 --> 00:49:23,680 of headlines from the newspapers, which 1217 00:49:23,680 --> 00:49:24,840 were not clear. 1218 00:49:24,840 --> 00:49:27,310 So I'll just read these out because I find them amusing. 1219 00:49:27,310 --> 00:49:29,580 "Red Tape Holds Up New Bridge." 1220 00:49:29,580 --> 00:49:32,630 So, OK, maybe the red tape temporally held it up, but not 1221 00:49:32,630 --> 00:49:34,000 spatially held it up. 1222 00:49:34,000 --> 00:49:36,000 OK, and then here's another one. "Something Went 1223 00:49:36,000 --> 00:49:37,950 Wrong in Jet Crash, Expert Says." 1224 00:49:37,950 --> 00:49:41,420 In fact, you hear this all the time on the news now. 1225 00:49:41,420 --> 00:49:42,900 Obviously, something went wrong. 1226 00:49:42,900 --> 00:49:45,233 You don't have to be an engineer to figure out something 1227 00:49:45,233 --> 00:49:46,570 went wrong in a jet crash. 1228 00:49:46,570 --> 00:49:49,930 Then, "Chef Throws Heart In To Help Feed the Hungry." 1229 00:49:49,930 --> 00:49:53,560 OK, well, maybe that's a little too much. 1230 00:49:53,560 --> 00:49:56,480 This is my favorite one, "Prostitutes Appeal to Pope." 1231 00:49:56,480 --> 00:49:58,385 OK, there's different ways you can appeal. 1232 00:50:01,630 --> 00:50:04,420 You don't have to appeal to the Pope in that way. 1233 00:50:04,420 --> 00:50:06,859 And then, "Panda Mating Fails, Vet Takes Over." 1234 00:50:06,859 --> 00:50:09,150 I don't think the vet really took over with the mating, 1235 00:50:09,150 --> 00:50:11,250 but you know what they mean. 1236 00:50:11,250 --> 00:50:15,480 OK, so one thing is clarity. 1237 00:50:15,480 --> 00:50:17,510 Another point is don't waffle. 1238 00:50:17,510 --> 00:50:20,640 You want things to be concise and get to the point. 1239 00:50:20,640 --> 00:50:23,780 So he's got this example here from what 1240 00:50:23,780 --> 00:50:27,490 he cites as a well-known but anonymous materials text. 1241 00:50:27,490 --> 00:50:29,140 "The selection of the proper material 1242 00:50:29,140 --> 00:50:30,960 is a key step in the design process, 1243 00:50:30,960 --> 00:50:32,830 because it is the crucial decision that 1244 00:50:32,830 --> 00:50:35,270 links computer calculations and the lines 1245 00:50:35,270 --> 00:50:37,890 on an engineering drawing with a real or working design." 1246 00:50:37,890 --> 00:50:39,414 But what does it say? 1247 00:50:39,414 --> 00:50:41,080 It says material selection is important. 1248 00:50:41,080 --> 00:50:44,170 So don't say something in some long-winded way 1249 00:50:44,170 --> 00:50:46,830 that you could say in a short way. 1250 00:50:46,830 --> 00:50:48,290 OK, let's see. 1251 00:50:51,190 --> 00:50:53,450 So let me move on to the next page. 1252 00:50:53,450 --> 00:50:55,900 The next step that I-- let me emphasize one more time, 1253 00:50:55,900 --> 00:50:59,620 is 8.5, revise and rewrite. 1254 00:50:59,620 --> 00:51:02,934 So writing really is iterative. 1255 00:51:02,934 --> 00:51:05,350 Those books that you've seen that Mike and I have written, 1256 00:51:05,350 --> 00:51:07,930 I cannot tell you how many drafts of each chapter we went 1257 00:51:07,930 --> 00:51:09,800 through over and over and over again. 1258 00:51:09,800 --> 00:51:16,080 So to make it good, you have to do it over and over again. 1259 00:51:16,080 --> 00:51:17,850 OK, there's that. 1260 00:51:17,850 --> 00:51:18,350 Let me see. 1261 00:51:18,350 --> 00:51:20,650 Is there anything else I have here? 1262 00:51:20,650 --> 00:51:23,020 Ah, here's a couple things that are not so obvious. 1263 00:51:23,020 --> 00:51:25,850 So one is, for each paragraph you should 1264 00:51:25,850 --> 00:51:27,870 have a good first sentence. 1265 00:51:27,870 --> 00:51:29,400 You should tell the reader something 1266 00:51:29,400 --> 00:51:31,609 they don't already know. 1267 00:51:31,609 --> 00:51:34,150 So there's some examples here, and you can read through them. 1268 00:51:34,150 --> 00:51:36,730 But it is really helpful for each paragraph 1269 00:51:36,730 --> 00:51:39,580 to have a good opening sentence. 1270 00:51:39,580 --> 00:51:41,417 Another thing is at the end of the paragraph 1271 00:51:41,417 --> 00:51:44,000 it's good if there's a sentence that links it to the next one. 1272 00:51:44,000 --> 00:51:47,580 So it hints at what the next paragraph's going to be about, 1273 00:51:47,580 --> 00:51:49,310 so it leads the reader through it, 1274 00:51:49,310 --> 00:51:51,530 and it is a logical progression. 1275 00:51:51,530 --> 00:51:53,320 So an opening sentence for the paragraph 1276 00:51:53,320 --> 00:51:55,500 and the final sentence, you might 1277 00:51:55,500 --> 00:51:57,947 want to look at in a bit more gory detail. 1278 00:51:57,947 --> 00:52:00,280 OK, and then there are some references at the very back, 1279 00:52:00,280 --> 00:52:02,430 at page 25. 1280 00:52:02,430 --> 00:52:05,830 And I brought a couple of books in that I have found helpful. 1281 00:52:05,830 --> 00:52:07,310 So you may have seen these. 1282 00:52:07,310 --> 00:52:10,260 One is called The Elements of Style 1283 00:52:10,260 --> 00:52:13,540 and this is by Strunk and White, so William Strunk, Jr. 1284 00:52:13,540 --> 00:52:14,760 and EB White. 1285 00:52:14,760 --> 00:52:18,630 You guys know EB White, Charlotte's Web, same guy. 1286 00:52:18,630 --> 00:52:23,360 He's written this small, small, not too long to have a look at 1287 00:52:23,360 --> 00:52:25,010 book about style. 1288 00:52:25,010 --> 00:52:30,610 So there's some rules of usage, which is grammar stuff, 1289 00:52:30,610 --> 00:52:33,090 but there's principles of composition 1290 00:52:33,090 --> 00:52:36,020 and there's a chapter called "An Approach to Style." 1291 00:52:36,020 --> 00:52:37,820 And so here's some of the headings. 1292 00:52:37,820 --> 00:52:39,630 Place yourself in the background. 1293 00:52:39,630 --> 00:52:41,320 Write in a way that comes naturally. 1294 00:52:41,320 --> 00:52:42,809 Work from a suitable design. 1295 00:52:42,809 --> 00:52:45,100 These people are not engineers, but they're saying work 1296 00:52:45,100 --> 00:52:46,058 from a suitable design. 1297 00:52:46,058 --> 00:52:47,980 It's like that concept thing. 1298 00:52:47,980 --> 00:52:49,960 Revise and rewrite, did I mention that, 1299 00:52:49,960 --> 00:52:51,130 revise and rewrite? 1300 00:52:51,130 --> 00:52:52,380 Do not overwrite. 1301 00:52:52,380 --> 00:52:54,950 Don't make it too complicated. 1302 00:52:54,950 --> 00:52:56,750 Avoid the use of qualifiers. 1303 00:52:56,750 --> 00:52:59,204 If you say something's very stiff, what does that mean? 1304 00:52:59,204 --> 00:53:00,370 You can just say it's stiff. 1305 00:53:00,370 --> 00:53:02,670 You don't have to say it's very stiff. 1306 00:53:02,670 --> 00:53:05,240 Very compared to what? 1307 00:53:05,240 --> 00:53:06,120 Let's see. 1308 00:53:06,120 --> 00:53:09,840 Use orthodox spelling, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. 1309 00:53:09,840 --> 00:53:12,130 Avoid fancy words. 1310 00:53:12,130 --> 00:53:14,630 OK, be clear, all this kind of stuff. 1311 00:53:14,630 --> 00:53:18,170 So Strunk and White is old but good. 1312 00:53:18,170 --> 00:53:21,450 And then, there's this book here by Bill Bryson. 1313 00:53:21,450 --> 00:53:24,160 Bryson's Dictionary of Troublesome Words. 1314 00:53:24,160 --> 00:53:26,490 So this is, it is like a dictionary. 1315 00:53:26,490 --> 00:53:30,250 It goes by letter and has different words, 1316 00:53:30,250 --> 00:53:32,430 but it talks about how people sometimes 1317 00:53:32,430 --> 00:53:35,000 use a word thinking it means one thing when it doesn't, it 1318 00:53:35,000 --> 00:53:36,590 actually means something else. 1319 00:53:36,590 --> 00:53:40,880 And so it's just words that people use commonly 1320 00:53:40,880 --> 00:53:45,470 that they sometimes confuse with what they really mean. 1321 00:53:45,470 --> 00:53:47,820 So it's a very handy thing too. 1322 00:53:47,820 --> 00:53:49,210 Do you know Bill Bryson? 1323 00:53:49,210 --> 00:53:50,821 Very funny travel writer. 1324 00:53:50,821 --> 00:53:53,070 If you ever go somewhere that Bill Bryson has been you 1325 00:53:53,070 --> 00:53:55,420 should get the book he's written about it because he's 1326 00:53:55,420 --> 00:53:56,830 very funny. 1327 00:53:56,830 --> 00:53:58,145 OK, so I think that's it. 1328 00:53:58,145 --> 00:54:00,270 Oh, and then, I think, the very end of this booklet 1329 00:54:00,270 --> 00:54:04,330 has some examples of good writing and bad writing. 1330 00:54:04,330 --> 00:54:07,510 So you can have a look at that too. 1331 00:54:07,510 --> 00:54:11,757 All right, so are we good on how to write a paper? 1332 00:54:11,757 --> 00:54:13,340 Do you have questions on how to write? 1333 00:54:13,340 --> 00:54:15,670 Writing is important. 1334 00:54:15,670 --> 00:54:17,480 So I have one more writing story. 1335 00:54:17,480 --> 00:54:20,530 So when I first got this job at MIT, I was living in Arlington, 1336 00:54:20,530 --> 00:54:22,980 and my mom comes to visit me from Toronto. 1337 00:54:22,980 --> 00:54:25,900 And I'm work, work, work, work, working, working, 1338 00:54:25,900 --> 00:54:28,371 and my mom says to me, she says, my, you 1339 00:54:28,371 --> 00:54:29,745 spend a lot of your life writing. 1340 00:54:29,745 --> 00:54:32,040 I'm like, Mom, that's what I get paid to do. 1341 00:54:32,040 --> 00:54:34,640 I get paid to write. 1342 00:54:34,640 --> 00:54:36,140 Like she always thought I was should 1343 00:54:36,140 --> 00:54:37,600 be spending maybe 30 hours a week 1344 00:54:37,600 --> 00:54:38,980 lecturing or something like that. 1345 00:54:38,980 --> 00:54:40,355 Like she, well, you're a teacher. 1346 00:54:40,355 --> 00:54:42,810 You only teach three hours a week, what is this? 1347 00:54:42,810 --> 00:54:43,930 I'm like, I write, Mom. 1348 00:54:43,930 --> 00:54:45,500 That's what I do. 1349 00:54:45,500 --> 00:54:48,700 So anyways, so writing is important 1350 00:54:48,700 --> 00:54:51,110 and giving presentations is important. 1351 00:54:51,110 --> 00:54:52,610 And no matter what you end up doing, 1352 00:54:52,610 --> 00:54:54,490 you're going to end up having to do those two things. 1353 00:54:54,490 --> 00:54:57,050 And if you do it well, it's going to make your life better, 1354 00:54:57,050 --> 00:54:59,910 and if you do it badly, you're not going to be so good. 1355 00:54:59,910 --> 00:55:01,860 So that's my message. 1356 00:55:01,860 --> 00:55:03,650 So I'm going to stop there because I 1357 00:55:03,650 --> 00:55:05,470 haven't got the next lecture ready, 1358 00:55:05,470 --> 00:55:07,710 and I can start that on Monday. 1359 00:55:07,710 --> 00:55:10,425 So Monday we'll do the cell mechanic stuff. 1360 00:55:10,425 --> 00:55:12,800 And then let me just-- because we're getting ridiculously 1361 00:55:12,800 --> 00:55:13,841 close to the end of term. 1362 00:55:13,841 --> 00:55:16,700 Like four weeks from today is the last test. 1363 00:55:16,700 --> 00:55:19,320 I know, it's shocking. 1364 00:55:19,320 --> 00:55:21,795 So there's one lecture on cell mechanics, 1365 00:55:21,795 --> 00:55:23,920 and then there's some more engineering applications 1366 00:55:23,920 --> 00:55:24,480 of foam. 1367 00:55:24,480 --> 00:55:27,150 I'm going to talk about energy absorption in foams and foams 1368 00:55:27,150 --> 00:55:29,000 in sandwich panels, that kind of stuff. 1369 00:55:29,000 --> 00:55:30,990 And then, we're going to talk about some natural materials 1370 00:55:30,990 --> 00:55:31,489 again. 1371 00:55:31,489 --> 00:55:33,880 We're going to talk about natural structures, so 1372 00:55:33,880 --> 00:55:39,080 like natural sandwich panels and natural cylindrical shells 1373 00:55:39,080 --> 00:55:40,465 with foamy cores. 1374 00:55:40,465 --> 00:55:41,840 So I've got lots of nature things 1375 00:55:41,840 --> 00:55:43,490 at the last part of the course, and you know 1376 00:55:43,490 --> 00:55:44,781 how I like those nature things. 1377 00:55:44,781 --> 00:55:46,970 So there you have it. 1378 00:55:46,970 --> 00:55:50,504 Bob's your uncle, as my mother would say. 1379 00:55:50,504 --> 00:55:51,920 You know what Bob's your uncle is? 1380 00:55:51,920 --> 00:55:53,669 Bob's your uncle is an English expression. 1381 00:55:53,669 --> 00:55:56,020 It just means there you have it. 1382 00:55:56,020 --> 00:55:57,870 There you have it.